tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post8414395870180112365..comments2024-01-19T10:55:32.829-08:00Comments on Summer Rain at Mountain View or Silicon Valley: I Practice Better Living!Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comBlogger57125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-45382652178027840502011-08-27T00:18:24.339-07:002011-08-27T00:18:24.339-07:00I enjoyed this one and the last line is priceless....I enjoyed this one and the last line is priceless. :)<br /><br />Cheers!Lord Emmanuelhttp://www.lordemmanuel.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-90774241492638707362011-08-26T10:48:35.633-07:002011-08-26T10:48:35.633-07:00The hope of love is beautiful :)
keep up the good ...The hope of love is beautiful :)<br />keep up the good work<br />CheersDawnhttp://www.fizadawn.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-65255058309929002412011-08-26T06:58:41.573-07:002011-08-26T06:58:41.573-07:00Incredible. Short and concise, but not lacking in ...Incredible. Short and concise, but not lacking in impact. :)Imperfecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00570671820738364056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-70514301284530545112011-08-23T12:55:03.218-07:002011-08-23T12:55:03.218-07:00wonderful take on the prompt...
I do feel bad for ...wonderful take on the prompt...<br />I do feel bad for the snails, though :-(e.a.s. demershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16009167844130542312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-63325177845844018292011-08-23T04:14:09.427-07:002011-08-23T04:14:09.427-07:00very lovely form~
meaningful message too~very lovely form~<br /><br />meaningful message too~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-16469402296578989832011-08-22T14:38:42.897-07:002011-08-22T14:38:42.897-07:00Wow. This was lovely writing.
The imagery you c...Wow. This was lovely writing.<br /><br />The imagery you created with your words was perfect. And the photo really helped bring it to life.<br /><br />Thanks for linking up.<br /><br />A+Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462124067637610359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-50975929589883633112011-08-22T14:29:03.521-07:002011-08-22T14:29:03.521-07:00Great stuff, I get a real sense of feelings, thoug...Great stuff, I get a real sense of feelings, thoughts, intuitions and sensations flowing through your prose.Markhttp://zenmirror.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/the-tide-of-sleep/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-30932803568278826582011-08-22T06:35:37.578-07:002011-08-22T06:35:37.578-07:00so lovely, so lively! love the inclusion of the sn...so lovely, so lively! love the inclusion of the snails ;)bendedspoonhttp://bendedspoon.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-64386640025758054022011-08-22T05:56:58.959-07:002011-08-22T05:56:58.959-07:00Hi Jingle! I really liked your poem a lot!! I ho...Hi Jingle! I really liked your poem a lot!! I hope that I did mine right. I tried to do 5-7 5-7 5-7-7. Please let me know what you think and if I did do it right. I've never tried this before but thought that I would give it a shot :) Peace and love, TerriTeresa Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11224853952214903621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-20304995634350990212011-08-21T21:41:19.764-07:002011-08-21T21:41:19.764-07:00Outstanding ... well done.
IsadoraOutstanding ... well done.<br />IsadoraIsadorahttp://insidethemindofisadora.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-14461592198781584022011-08-21T11:30:50.458-07:002011-08-21T11:30:50.458-07:00Packaged and posted perfectly. A neat little read!...Packaged and posted perfectly. A neat little read!Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-63412584176048134622011-08-21T09:04:10.807-07:002011-08-21T09:04:10.807-07:00Beautiful!
BlessingsBeautiful!<br />BlessingsBethe77https://www.blogger.com/profile/07908965956063875893noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-36699817446937497722011-08-21T06:09:02.821-07:002011-08-21T06:09:02.821-07:00This was a beautiful poem nd the form fitted well....This was a beautiful poem nd the form fitted well.<br />Thanks for stopping by my blog :)Chim's World of Literaturehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08052021144209095350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-38633975752646767672011-08-21T05:00:41.358-07:002011-08-21T05:00:41.358-07:00Sweet, light, and creative!Sweet, light, and creative!poetryroadnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-53235597227358866112011-08-20T23:02:04.960-07:002011-08-20T23:02:04.960-07:00lovely images! love the last line. :)lovely images! love the last line. :)dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-65796719418724648012011-08-20T19:46:36.243-07:002011-08-20T19:46:36.243-07:00A good practice. Aches/acts/ reactions hard to ge...A good practice. Aches/acts/ reactions hard to get away from.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-59665972758969147612011-08-20T19:44:02.577-07:002011-08-20T19:44:02.577-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Outlawyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15698845661756444061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-8562487408616006912011-08-20T19:06:07.381-07:002011-08-20T19:06:07.381-07:00Interesting, I know the feeling, written well, and...Interesting, I know the feeling, written well, and love the ending, thank you, WSAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-33205359751644252722011-08-20T18:38:05.920-07:002011-08-20T18:38:05.920-07:00Love always works to keep things going. Greeat po...Love always works to keep things going. Greeat poem.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17039433088952481073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-79466539332835183492011-08-20T17:27:13.716-07:002011-08-20T17:27:13.716-07:00Imaginative poem - really enjoyed reading it :)Imaginative poem - really enjoyed reading it :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-13907054562131603082011-08-20T12:59:04.241-07:002011-08-20T12:59:04.241-07:00I like it.I like it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-50333908846404794022011-08-20T07:18:37.728-07:002011-08-20T07:18:37.728-07:00A good job !A good job !MISHhttp://writer-in-transit.co.za/bluebell-sss-prompt-no-8-blind/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-16599054815369976072011-08-20T00:25:28.930-07:002011-08-20T00:25:28.930-07:00Great poem!Great poem!Cheryl D.https://www.blogger.com/profile/09325231488203008376noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-7974790174477473322011-08-19T22:04:48.572-07:002011-08-19T22:04:48.572-07:00oh! wow! how sweet short and crip poetry...oh! wow! how sweet short and crip poetry...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-39613328341964424152011-08-19T21:58:55.554-07:002011-08-19T21:58:55.554-07:00Oh, love always keeps the course sailing . . . Bea...Oh, love always keeps the course sailing . . . Beautifully! So nice :)Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14368539518339009833noreply@blogger.com