tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post2071899285283524958..comments2024-01-19T10:55:32.829-08:00Comments on Summer Rain at Mountain View or Silicon Valley: Alphabe-Thursday /Short Story Slam in 55 Words.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comBlogger56125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-19082933612682376242011-09-15T05:31:06.913-07:002011-09-15T05:31:06.913-07:00Wow! Talk about a tug on the emotions!Wow! Talk about a tug on the emotions!Esther Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12129643709319136198noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-77198046900130278382011-09-12T22:24:24.486-07:002011-09-12T22:24:24.486-07:00Sad that life can be so unfair...Sad that life can be so unfair...e.a.s. demershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16009167844130542312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-41163266461198241982011-09-08T19:40:14.192-07:002011-09-08T19:40:14.192-07:00wow. so much is conveyed in a very
short story. lo...wow. so much is conveyed in a very<br />short story. love this tale.Shaunahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15279846999053851468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-8436595942006140042011-09-08T06:40:11.925-07:002011-09-08T06:40:11.925-07:00Ouch...RL can prove quite painful at times! Nice ...Ouch...RL can prove quite painful at times! Nice job!Serena Shayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17959664736807639363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-14242760217546107112011-09-05T18:32:38.999-07:002011-09-05T18:32:38.999-07:00There is a certain beauty in its dourness, enjoyed...There is a certain beauty in its dourness, enjoyed it very much!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-78000167103044571742011-09-05T01:49:43.427-07:002011-09-05T01:49:43.427-07:00Seems to be an age-old story, but never told quite...Seems to be an age-old story, but never told quite in this way. Lovely and the image makes it all the more haunting.Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-3596682935407270152011-09-04T19:51:38.068-07:002011-09-04T19:51:38.068-07:00Sad and tragic but very well told.
http://gatele...Sad and tragic but very well told. <br /><br />http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/05/the-milky-seas/Ann LeFlorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09421100825301270608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-24019647018318544502011-09-04T10:33:48.823-07:002011-09-04T10:33:48.823-07:00'Waves of the sea shiver'
Oh, what a beau...'Waves of the sea shiver'<br /><br />Oh, what a beautiful line. Such a tragic tale poignantly and beautiful told.<br /><br />This was absolutely terrific writing.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing it.<br /><br />A+Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462124067637610359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-35719156666261989032011-09-04T03:02:10.387-07:002011-09-04T03:02:10.387-07:00A tragic story of love and betrayal. Something tha...A tragic story of love and betrayal. Something that happens so oftenly in life.Chim's World of Literaturehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08052021144209095350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-90427041051942166622011-09-03T23:10:32.073-07:002011-09-03T23:10:32.073-07:00A truly sad tale of infidelity and betrayal, and w...A truly sad tale of infidelity and betrayal, and well told, too. Thank you.Doctor FTSEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10052101566471519778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-31587711548760466832011-09-03T14:06:02.903-07:002011-09-03T14:06:02.903-07:00Wow, that is a slam. Great 55.Wow, that is a slam. Great 55.Lindahttp://www.roses2rainbows.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-64667818672769033482011-09-03T13:14:07.430-07:002011-09-03T13:14:07.430-07:00Stark, cold, and heartbreaking, but beautiful beca...Stark, cold, and heartbreaking, but beautiful because it's so simply told. :)<br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://ifacethesun.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/alone-with-you-a-flash-fic-photo-challenge/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-6510777341468358262011-09-03T11:50:31.683-07:002011-09-03T11:50:31.683-07:00Beautiful story and with some many possible ending...Beautiful story and with some many possible endings...another question :will she accept the baby whatever be its origins?Rek Seshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13484322426994645221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-30015767006003842242011-09-03T11:31:11.009-07:002011-09-03T11:31:11.009-07:00I wonder how the other mother let the baby go? Mu...I wonder how the other mother let the baby go? Must've broke her heart.<br /><br />An AWESOME 55 that will linger in my mind.Jannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-17381955175343437302011-09-03T09:32:58.639-07:002011-09-03T09:32:58.639-07:00My mother used to tell me you could never trust a ...My mother used to tell me you could never trust a sailor. I asked why and she'd reply, "because they usually have a girl waiting in every port."<br />Who knows, this reminded me of that though.<br />Awwww Sad for the girl waiting.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-77762110028125759842011-09-03T08:45:10.113-07:002011-09-03T08:45:10.113-07:00Sad story fabulously told in only 55 words!Sad story fabulously told in only 55 words!Akelamaluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11234268568845148285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-55845044246949307822011-09-03T06:29:36.134-07:002011-09-03T06:29:36.134-07:00Funny that I used the same phrase that you used as...Funny that I used the same phrase that you used as my title. Awesome entry. Enjoyed it! :)<br /><br />Here is my offering: http://kweschn.wordpress.com/2011/09/03/there-she-stands/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-11327950837198082552011-09-03T05:30:26.786-07:002011-09-03T05:30:26.786-07:00Touching!
Greetings from Germany,
Birgit
PS: Se...Touching! <br /><br />Greetings from Germany,<br />Birgit<br /><br />PS: See my T post <a href="http://swappinghowdies.blogspot.com/2011/09/t-is-for-tangled.html" rel="nofollow"> here</a>! :)Birgithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13871374325669609265noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-20939221514001698232011-09-02T21:04:02.699-07:002011-09-02T21:04:02.699-07:00Such saddness and truth are held in this story.
B...Such saddness and truth are held in this story. <br />BlessingsBethe77https://www.blogger.com/profile/07908965956063875893noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-9595451510428629202011-09-02T20:24:59.446-07:002011-09-02T20:24:59.446-07:00A shocking development! Aha, we all jumped to the ...A shocking development! Aha, we all jumped to the conclusion that the baby is his. Clever to leave it ambiguous at the end.<br />RosieRosie@travel-i-taleshttp://travel-i-tales.blogspot.com/2011/08/lets-start-with-diva.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-60302183400757156032011-09-02T20:02:46.470-07:002011-09-02T20:02:46.470-07:00there is always an unexpected news for each life t...there is always an unexpected news for each life turn. great write on someone else's truth.bendedspoonhttp://bendedspoon.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-75578889496950032011-09-02T19:12:36.925-07:002011-09-02T19:12:36.925-07:00Life with all its unexpected happenings. Great wri...Life with all its unexpected happenings. Great writing!kaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-22003409209836817662011-09-02T18:25:59.320-07:002011-09-02T18:25:59.320-07:00Wonderful story in 55 words, and complete with a v...Wonderful story in 55 words, and complete with a vivid picture in my mind.Raw Thoughts And Feelingshttp://www.rawthoughtsandfeelings.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-63429420031032010712011-09-02T18:09:07.554-07:002011-09-02T18:09:07.554-07:00Yes, life is unfair. Nicely done.
Visiting from a...Yes, life is unfair. Nicely done.<br /><br />Visiting from alphabe-thursday.Wantapeanuthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11993949583915924482noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-57566299005707734382011-09-02T15:39:03.449-07:002011-09-02T15:39:03.449-07:00This is so sad, you know. But situations like this...This is so sad, you know. But situations like this occurs. I pity the victims though. <br /><br />Cheers!Lord Emmanuelhttp://www.lordemmanuel.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com