tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post2775828245910767269..comments2024-01-19T10:55:32.829-08:00Comments on Summer Rain at Mountain View or Silicon Valley: A Magpie TaleLinda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comBlogger64125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-36430351621255328902012-01-29T15:34:33.393-08:002012-01-29T15:34:33.393-08:00Am I real? Where am I? Questions I've asked my...Am I real? Where am I? Questions I've asked myself; at first feeling that I was without help or hope and then like the ending of our poem; <br /><br />The air is screaming with death,<br />Please wheel me through this place,<br />Chair by chair,<br />until my rebirth.<br /><br />I found that in spite of the pain and the end of all I thought I needed and wanted; there was only better waiting for me. <br />Very well done. Blessings!<br /><br />http://elizena-lovingmycreator.blogspot.com/Elizenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05749011867923005914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-15185268244619297012011-12-05T16:38:21.027-08:002011-12-05T16:38:21.027-08:00Lovely poem! I especially enjoyed the last four li...Lovely poem! I especially enjoyed the last four lines; beautiful work and a lovely blog. Thank you kindly for stopping by.... au revoir!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-54552414787119828342011-11-25T22:11:32.832-08:002011-11-25T22:11:32.832-08:00Nice Blog Your's Visit Also India Tour Travel,...Nice Blog Your's Visit Also <a href="http://www.myindiatourtravel.com/" title="India Travel Tour,India Tour,India Travel " rel="nofollow">India Tour Travel,India Travel Tour</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-88516449556787409042011-11-19T19:24:31.702-08:002011-11-19T19:24:31.702-08:00I enjoyed it... Nice!
JJRod'zI enjoyed it... Nice! <br /><br />JJRod'zJJ Roa Rodriguezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501127870785148555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-54852384750857218812011-11-18T06:35:32.662-08:002011-11-18T06:35:32.662-08:00lovely.mind-catching. sarala [prayaga]lovely.mind-catching. sarala [prayaga]rudraprayagahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13775039913655864157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-90681521860816277422011-11-17T15:01:01.741-08:002011-11-17T15:01:01.741-08:00Killer last stanza. Works beautifully; so unexpect...Killer last stanza. Works beautifully; so unexpected. Great job!Adura Ojohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10787703060107491771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-70394968382835798292011-11-17T14:24:03.464-08:002011-11-17T14:24:03.464-08:00Wow. "freedom pie" and such a brilliant ...Wow. "freedom pie" and such a brilliant ending. Thank you.dshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616750784052488695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-7089007676149841342011-11-17T05:34:56.131-08:002011-11-17T05:34:56.131-08:00I like the magpie's tale.
Freedom pie as you n...I like the magpie's tale.<br />Freedom pie as you name it. Lovely!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-61200762134118707442011-11-16T15:35:42.347-08:002011-11-16T15:35:42.347-08:00questioning self and existence!questioning self and existence!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-64574683025961523752011-11-16T12:34:43.091-08:002011-11-16T12:34:43.091-08:00Grand effort.Grand effort.Frikohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04277167831642088694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-20527000065436415752011-11-16T12:21:17.054-08:002011-11-16T12:21:17.054-08:00This is quite an evocative piece.This is quite an evocative piece.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-78913505016278685202011-11-16T06:39:21.802-08:002011-11-16T06:39:21.802-08:00i'd say you managed to capture quite well the ...i'd say you managed to capture quite well the essence of the image - very well done!Lillyhttp://summaryofmysoul.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-34479988613213095682011-11-16T06:38:05.722-08:002011-11-16T06:38:05.722-08:00Excellent -- and the ending!Excellent -- and the ending!Becky Sainhttp://bsain.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-86457561437998135332011-11-16T03:48:32.787-08:002011-11-16T03:48:32.787-08:00Chilling yet in that chill of the fog rebirth! I l...Chilling yet in that chill of the fog rebirth! I love how you sensed the feelings behind the image!chiccorealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-70210649317263841382011-11-16T03:33:53.838-08:002011-11-16T03:33:53.838-08:00what i was looking at is your choice of words you ...what i was looking at is your choice of words you know and i find this attractive that simplicity can convey complexities. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-27266455442253127302011-11-15T20:10:08.828-08:002011-11-15T20:10:08.828-08:00A chilly endingA chilly endingmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-62333855341656601352011-11-15T18:55:56.924-08:002011-11-15T18:55:56.924-08:00the last stanza is very nicethe last stanza is very niceAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-36365833997508535562011-11-15T18:42:01.534-08:002011-11-15T18:42:01.534-08:00haunting, lovely pic as well :) thanks for the vis...haunting, lovely pic as well :) thanks for the visit!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-85766249515267984842011-11-15T10:16:34.694-08:002011-11-15T10:16:34.694-08:00i loved the deep emotions u embedded in this poem....i loved the deep emotions u embedded in this poem..wished it was a little longer..u left me asking for more!Rohit_blogger at http://floating-expressions.blogspot.in/https://www.blogger.com/profile/00332832229217846976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-12891165496186273482011-11-15T09:44:43.651-08:002011-11-15T09:44:43.651-08:00Surreal and a little disturbing. I like it! :)Surreal and a little disturbing. I like it! :)stephaniesattichttp://www.stephaniesattic.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-53283139841630198552011-11-15T09:12:49.862-08:002011-11-15T09:12:49.862-08:00So beautiful...the ending a total surpriseSo beautiful...the ending a total surpriseSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-86043756712408462972011-11-15T08:32:28.266-08:002011-11-15T08:32:28.266-08:00Beautiful write hon!Beautiful write hon!paulo guimaraeshttp://www.thewaytoshaolin.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-52449635158676003972011-11-15T05:04:43.780-08:002011-11-15T05:04:43.780-08:00This is nice and really different:)This is nice and really different:)Tarang Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10346902969017351667noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-50692330435825664182011-11-15T01:01:14.847-08:002011-11-15T01:01:14.847-08:00Love the way the first verse prepares the way for ...Love the way the first verse prepares the way for the last. There is a real sense of conclusion.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-25750443051853583892011-11-15T00:16:27.773-08:002011-11-15T00:16:27.773-08:00A poem that transports to a halfway place between ...A poem that transports to a halfway place between worlds and lives. Great take on this intriguing Magpie.Intellibloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.com