tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post7841080256069918745..comments2024-01-19T10:55:32.829-08:00Comments on Summer Rain at Mountain View or Silicon Valley: The Hourglass Life (Change, Short Story Slam Week 15)Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comBlogger50125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-1808030153922389892011-12-08T15:27:48.929-08:002011-12-08T15:27:48.929-08:00Some profound truths in this one! Well done :-)Some profound truths in this one! Well done :-)e.a.s. demershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16009167844130542312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-3018177991080938042011-12-07T17:13:53.370-08:002011-12-07T17:13:53.370-08:00Nicely imagined. Loved your last line. Thanks so m...Nicely imagined. Loved your last line. Thanks so much for visiting my blog.Suzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05337531041006701719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-3145155240925745992011-11-26T21:07:57.765-08:002011-11-26T21:07:57.765-08:00The first stanza sets up the poem very nicely. Ve...The first stanza sets up the poem very nicely. Very enjoyable.<br />WilliamWilliam Leedhttp://talkingleaves.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-47774239911726961332011-11-26T09:35:42.368-08:002011-11-26T09:35:42.368-08:00Great flow here, both of words and the sentiment b...Great flow here, both of words and the sentiment behind them. Thank you for sharing.Guilie Castillohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09006999087139126972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-41489601244322338222011-11-26T06:27:23.423-08:002011-11-26T06:27:23.423-08:00wise words poetically put ....thank you xwise words poetically put ....thank you xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10624767707167052328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-11613100456668942572011-11-25T06:17:42.084-08:002011-11-25T06:17:42.084-08:00I like the use of up and downs, with the sand also...I like the use of up and downs, with the sand also being up and down in the timer.Intentional?<br />JamieAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-7371983136814729512011-11-25T03:23:56.575-08:002011-11-25T03:23:56.575-08:00the ups and downs of life...we all have them, best...the ups and downs of life...we all have them, best to accept them.Charlie Paranthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06684221320439752073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-75062624464241122872011-11-24T20:03:58.999-08:002011-11-24T20:03:58.999-08:00Hey Jb here just wanted to say that
Thanksgiving w...Hey Jb here just wanted to say that<br />Thanksgiving was great. I want to thank you for visiting and leaving a comment.JBSTUFFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02111751122227636656noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-52823421601277226522011-11-24T14:45:21.953-08:002011-11-24T14:45:21.953-08:00Very nice poem. Thank you for your thanksgiving wi...Very nice poem. Thank you for your thanksgiving wishes. Take care. Keep writing.Stella Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06699491230987143490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-21935561975783025372011-11-24T11:49:39.577-08:002011-11-24T11:49:39.577-08:00Interesting metaphor!Interesting metaphor!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-83195791604025733662011-11-24T08:46:30.214-08:002011-11-24T08:46:30.214-08:00All we need it to have someone to turn our hourgla...All we need it to have someone to turn our hourglass over now and then. Delightfulkeiths ramblingshttp://keithsramblings.blogspot.com/2011/11/hourglass.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-56239519449386763442011-11-24T08:01:40.783-08:002011-11-24T08:01:40.783-08:00lovely....
"Feeling timid for changes,Yet I m...lovely....<br />"Feeling timid for changes,Yet I must accept the ups and downs life arranges."<br />wow....dakshihttp://www.loveamongotherthings.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-80652925832824430842011-11-24T07:36:38.445-08:002011-11-24T07:36:38.445-08:00So nicely stated. Lovely poem.So nicely stated. Lovely poem.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-54523960438290287572011-11-24T05:11:05.779-08:002011-11-24T05:11:05.779-08:00A well said analogy of the sands passing through t...A well said analogy of the sands passing through the hourglass. Nice one!<br /><br />http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/11/23/the-last-grain-of-sand/Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/11/23/the-last-grain-of-sand/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-20554544613219896122011-11-24T04:42:28.743-08:002011-11-24T04:42:28.743-08:00Beautiful words! Thanks for the visit.
Kim, USABeautiful words! Thanks for the visit. <br /><br /><a href="http://www.myphotographyinfocus.com" rel="nofollow">Kim, USA</a>Kim, USAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06648960796504608061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-28724750630467148342011-11-23T22:33:34.184-08:002011-11-23T22:33:34.184-08:00you are very insightful. It's all about reachi...you are very insightful. It's all about reaching a different plane.<br />As we learn and grow more and more we will one day reach the plane of enlightenment we were meant to be in.<br />:)<br />Happy Thanks giving :)A Lady's Lifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11973102350411443282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-1106497357369703432011-11-23T20:53:09.208-08:002011-11-23T20:53:09.208-08:00This is very nice!This is very nice!Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15051904118383493849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-6751902800807209422011-11-23T20:26:42.981-08:002011-11-23T20:26:42.981-08:00Wow, I can so relate to this hour glass feel! Cell...Wow, I can so relate to this hour glass feel! Cello you painted the mood so well, with your imagery!<br />I love these lines:<br />"Grains of sand I’m considered as,<br />Don’t you think I’m grain of children,<br />Feeling timid for changes,<br />Yet, I must accept the ups and downs life arranges"<br /><br />I can so relate to this stanza; so well said!Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-15296964500038188252011-11-23T20:10:11.950-08:002011-11-23T20:10:11.950-08:00beautifully crafted!beautifully crafted!magiceyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17848851692951192508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-36511170200323957272011-11-23T19:40:36.793-08:002011-11-23T19:40:36.793-08:00truth and wisdom beautifully packed in lovely vers...truth and wisdom beautifully packed in lovely verse ...Celestial Dreamzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11665499902779022498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-89285084532409191592011-11-23T18:28:48.125-08:002011-11-23T18:28:48.125-08:00Thank you!Thank you!Miriam Saganhttp://miriamswell.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-77497400248844833712011-11-22T18:52:39.644-08:002011-11-22T18:52:39.644-08:00nicely written... and thoughtful one... :)nicely written... and thoughtful one... :)Nenihttp://purple-neni.blogspot.com/2011/11/lady-whom-she-hates.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-1802848024168481032011-11-22T18:35:52.970-08:002011-11-22T18:35:52.970-08:00Excellent! Change is important! :)Excellent! Change is important! :)Kweschnhttp://kweschn.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-31796106985878998152011-11-22T03:49:07.551-08:002011-11-22T03:49:07.551-08:00lovely it is
Awesome verses, deep meaning and bri...lovely it is <br />Awesome verses, deep meaning and brilliant message !!Jyoti Mishrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01794675170127168298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6600431574581674215.post-35969121575648192982011-11-21T21:39:29.576-08:002011-11-21T21:39:29.576-08:00Change is difficult to accept, yet in the struggle...Change is difficult to accept, yet in the struggle, we still fight for the climb to the top. An amazing write. Thank you!Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14368539518339009833noreply@blogger.com