Dear Friend, Welcome To Jingle Poetry Monday Potluck Week 9, Please feel free to submit any poem, not necessarily related to the theme to our potluck today, have fun!
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/11/poetry-potluck-buildings-landmarks-and.html
The Following is my entry related to the theme: Fortress, Buildings, Monuments! Enjoy!
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Mount Mushmore,
Carved to honor the U. S. presidents in Four,
Museums with guarded doors,
Made to display antiques and dinosaurs.
The Great Wall,
Built to fight a painful war,
The shopping mall,
Constructed to host business store.
The petting zoo,
Specialized to farm animals for kids cute,
The public school,
Supported by the government to educate kids, a tool.
I like concrete walls,
I love waterfalls,
I enjoy solid floors,
I fancy small animal print-paws,
I fear cold wars,
I avoid clinched jaws.
Domes, Homes,
They inspire me to write more poems.
Buildings, fortress, and memorial constructions,
They produce consumer productions.
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31 comments:
You have a treasure trove of beautiful poetry...an endless source..your brain! Good job and happy Monday!!!
I LOVE THIS JINGLE!!!
I enjoyed the imagery of this one Jingle it has such a positive flow to it well done!
Great one! Keep up writing more poems, you have the talent! Happy Week!
Beautiful verses in keeping with this week's Poetry Potluck Theme Jingle :-)
A math wizard and a poetess...what a perfect combination...sure it helps you much with the rhyme...just kidding dear!
"I like concrete walls,
I love waterfalls,
I enjoy solid floors"
nice!
What an enjoyable poem! I love the pictures throughout. I'm thinking that we just don't do things the way they used to.
Nicely placed photos relating to the flow of your wonderful words.
Buildings, fortress, and memorial constructions,
They produce consumer productions...
...true indeed...Monuments definitely = money going into someone's pockets...felt.
I loved the sarcastic and the sweet flavour of the words!
i like the consumerism aspect of it interspersing with the appreciation of cold hard concrete- well done ji!
wonderful poems!
Very lovely.
Glad you're inspired to write more.
Enjoyed.
beautiful post jingle. your blogs never cease to amaze me.
trisha
mydomainpvt.wordpress.com
You know what Jingle...you love life and writing and encouraging and it shows in everything you write. :))
Happy Potluck friend.
Dear Jingle
Great poetry and I have enjoyed it.. thanks for sharing...
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Beautiful poems ...happy potluck!
Fabulous...great potluck entry... :)
i love writing poetry...er, EONS ago...:)))
i love what's goin on here...you are really a talent. keep it up:)
You are in a class of your own when it comes to writing poetry.
Loved the post.
Yvonne.
Brilliant poem, Ji. I found the last stanza ironical. Great work. :)
Great verses, Jingle! (and i love the new layout on the Jingle Poetry blog :)
Hi Jingle,
Ive had a go at this Potluck themee over at mine. How do I enter... or what do I do now?
I like what you have done here...
Wow, I liked the feelings and emotions in this poem, it was very very charming.
Loved the way you submitted with the pictures. Very captivating.
Thanks for sharing
S.
Charming. The greatest monuments are mostly from ancient times, able to withstand war, destruction and greed.
Hallo Jingle,
Your this poetry is really very thoutful and attractive.I liked it.
Best wishes.
Hemant
http://childrensheaven.blogspot.com.
You always come up with such beautiful images and words. Have a great week :)
Wonderful imagery to compliment your poem ... brilliantly done, I loved it :o)
This is a terrific post..loved the photos and the flowing stream of your words...just great!
Beautiful imagery to compliment your poem, so nicely done!
Warmly
Marinela
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