Tuesday, May 3, 2011
There Is Always Another Story (4 Poets Rally Week 43)
There is always another day,
Cloudy or sunny;
There is always another story,
Sad or funny,
Let go of faded dreams,
Never mind silent screams;
Offer yourself a small patch,
Where you can garden;
Have an agenda in sketch,
So that you carry no pardon;
At the darkest hour,
Wait for early birds chirp,
As the sun greets the flower,
Watch the morning dew drip.
My entry for Thursday Poets Rally Week 43, Which takes place May 5-12, A free verse is accepted, every poet is welcome Here
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82 comments:
great poem
Ever wonder what the very first story made-up was?
I like the poem. :)
@Eric It probably was either a scary story or a love story.
So very beautiful !!
Wonderful poem Jingle.
Yvonne.
this was quite uplifting
Great poem full of hope! Blessings, Joanne
I like what you talk about carrying a pardon. Whoa.
Loved these lines too:
Offer yourself a small patch,
Where you can garden. :)
Looking forward to the blue bell slam, thanks for the info Ji!
Nice one. Enjoyed it.
very cute poem....feel your happiness in it my Dearest Jingle...enjoy as well(+)
soulbro*;)xoxoxo---{--@
I love your poem Jingle. So very inspiring, would be nice to have it hanging in my office.
Love the poem. Thanks for stopping by.
Very inspirational! Beautiful indeed!
Beautiful thoughts.
That is so nice :) happy rally to you too jingle!
An uplifting poem for making our day a positive one. Please continue unlocking your stories for us. I am excited about Bluebell slam. Should be fun and a good way of connecting with other writers.
Be blessed and here is a smile for you Jingle :>)
Iris
Bright and beautiful. A lovely write, well done!
A lovely poem which is so true ... there is always another day & another story /poem to write ...
Thanks for visiting my blog .
I love it, Jingle. It is so positively positive. : )
I enjoy your thought process.
"All of the yesterdays are dead...
we will always have tomorrow"
Genebrother
i like the way it started...
Except for 'never mind silent screams', what an awesome poem. Wait - that really was a good line, just disturbing!
Beautiful poem and sentiment! ~ Rose
Nice poem & image, Jingle.
Wonderful writing as always.. Have a great night..
Great poem! There are definitely always more stories. :)
Like this quite a lot! First poem I'm reading in my first Rally!
Excellent as always and great advice.
there's always good poems from you Jingle...:-)
you are right there is always a story to tell. we dont kids wont have anything to read about..
jingle i want to know how i can be apart of the Bluebell Books blog.
Simply Superb.
So inspiring...
Cheerful poem, putting sadness to one side - thanks, as to the first story - a nursery tale for a curious child
Cheerful poem, putting sadness to one side - thanks, as to the first story - a nursery tale for a curious child
I was carried away with the poem ...so nice :)
Lots to think about in this poem! Thank you for sharing!
thank you for the inspiration. love it :)
I love how positive your poems are. They are simple yet they give off an undeniable image of good vibes.
I was witnessing a feeling of weariness within me after writing a lots of poems on and on in my mother tongue. Once I even thought of stopping this writing totally. But the plain fact is that I am bound to write. Again and again. Reading your poem filled me with fresh hope..
There is always a new line to write,
A new word to speak,
A new thought to hang on to.. :)
And every story has yet another side
So does a circle: inside and outside!
This is a sweet piece!
Cheers
Soft, sweet and visually warm.
Nice and very beautiful poem....
Hemant
http://childrensheaven.blogspot.com
You're right... there is, always!
Beautiful and carefree. I like it! :)
beautiful expressions
A lovely piece, Jingle. As long as the birds don't chirp too early!
I love the first four lines of this poem especially - great rhythm.
Thanks for visiting my site.
Great poem Ji, loved the glass half full feel.
Love hearing that theres a Prose thing starting up. Might get me posting prose again.
The Lonely Recluse.
Great poem, Jingle AAA+++
Good job Jingle, nice poem.
Lovely and optimistic =)
Always on the brighter side of life..As always an optimistic piece :)
There is always another day, another time - nice!
Beautiful :)
beautiful
thanks for sharing the sunshine with us... i love the upbeat, perky tone of this poem. simply refreshing! :)
This is so beautiful!
Love the optimism and the lovely rhymes here! It is so upbeat!
thanks for the info about the new community!!
And your poem is awesome!! I just loved it like hell!!
with warm regards
CatchyTips for Writers
Beautiful Jingle, like a flower under the sun collecting drops of warmth.
Yes Ji, there always another day, and there's always another story.
Short and meaningful.
Sorry for not being a part of rally this time. Busy with exam preparation, you see but then its a family in itself and I couldn't stop myself reading some of the poems.
Have a great day ahead.
This is a very hope-filled poem.
Jingle, this is a very good poem. I love how uplifting it is...
For me, this line says so much..."Let go of faded dreams,"
Nice Ji
a sunny, lovely write. :)
"Let go of faded dreams,
Never mind silent screams;"
Great write...these two lines are especially powerful!
Love the optimistic message of this poem.
"Let go of faded dreams,
Never mind silent screams;"
...was my favorite part. Excellent! :D
Again, another inspiring poem! I'll make sure to let go of faded dreams. They have no use in the present.
And btw, it's so timely that you'll have a meme for short stories. I've recently started writing short stories again. I'm so excited to join! Yay!
This is well said poetic advice ... we should all heed.
Beautiful jingle...been having sleepless nights lately...this makes me look at my nights frm a different perspective all together...
Fantastic write! Sometimes people get so wrapped up in the past that they don't see the now or the what may bes....
i love it Jingle thank you. Words to remember
Beautiful.
I can always count of you for a breath of fresh air. At least that is how it feels when I read your work :)
wonderful poem and thanks for all the motivating words. You keep me going. Love, Radhika
i love waiting to hear the birds chirping.
your words motivate me. really. :)
Always another day...how true. Thank you for reminding us of this. I've been meaning to join your poet's rally for some time now, and here I am, finally. Worth it for this poem alone. It's just the right poem for this week. Thanks Jingle.
Love the poem, needed the lift today!
Thanks for the comment..
Happy Thursday.
I really like this.
I love this poem, truly its very well done i think its in my personal top five of works you have done. Thanks for sharing. I feel since i have been apart of these rallies my writting has been improving greatly every week. So thanks for all your hard work to get these thigns together,
At the darkest hour, waiting for birds to chirp. That's faith.
thanks Jingle I need to do my best to always remember this.
attractive and mind-catching.
prayaga
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