Wednesday, September 14, 2011

A Summer Vacation Acrostic in 55 Words



Summer is leaving tomorrow,
Usha's heart is filled with sorrow;
Met him during her summer vacation,
Made best friends with no hesitation;
Everyday, they've spent quality time together,
Relaxing!
.
Volcanic passions gather,
A romance's cooking;
Can't help feeling
And caring,
They made love
Inside a sailboat,
Oh, my,
Now, time to let it go afloat.





Alphabe-Thursday
 (V=Vacation, Very Rare One )

Poetry Jam  (Sea Adventure)

Flash Friday 55 with Mr. Knowitall: Write a fiction, a poem or a story, share..

48 comments:

ellen b. said...

You have a way with words! Well done...

HyperCRYPTICal said...

Like the sailboat image - would't mind it myself!

Anna :o]

Lolamouse said...

Sounds like a great summer vacation to me!

Teresa said...

Wonderful!

Barbara Rosenzweig said...

This is terrific!!

Thanks for visiting my white rose!

Judie said...

Ah, the joy and heartbreak of a summer romance! You certainly spelled it out creatively!!!

Bhargav said...

awesome... swift journey :)

Riet said...

Great V word and poem

Jack Edwards Poetry said...

Great poem about a summer romance.

jfb57 said...

Oh the heartbreak! Great take on the prompt!

The Unknowngnome said...

Good job. I like very much "inside a sailboat" and "now it's time to let it go afloat".

Dave King said...

I always think it so clever to do that, but when the result is a poem that has integrity and is not forced, like this one it's amazing!

JDaniel4's Mom said...

What a summer tale! You told so much in so few words!

welcome to my world of poetry said...

Well done on an exscellent clever write,

Have a good day.
Yvonne.

Tigerbrite said...

Like it. Very clever.

Raw Thoughts And Feelings said...

sounds great!

Jo said...

love this
~Jo

Leckeres für Mensch und Katze - Goodies for a pleasant life said...

Beautiful pics and words :)

Sue said...

Oh dear. Summer's over. Time to let go...

Cute.

=)

Rajlakshmi said...

beautiful write

antomaniax said...

Nice poem,indeed!

groundedangel said...

I can imagine you miss it all now. I remember feeling this way.

haikulovesongs said...

very inaginitive combining of the prompts into a wonderful poem!
dani

Margaret said...

Let's hope she's the one with the sailboat! :)

G-Man said...

This was a fantastic piece of Literary Art!
Loved your 55 My Friend
Thank You for sharing.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

Brian Miller said...

nice....summer love...and making love on a sail boat is def a big hit...

RoHiT Iyer said...

You totally owned the post!! Lovely piece of writing. Great creativity :D

Keep 'em coming!! Thanks for visiting my blog:)

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jen said...

Thanks for stopping by today. New follower from Jenny Matlock.

Well written.

Bijaylaxmi said...

Very creative, beautiful presentation of words...with full of life...:)

Thank you for commenting on my poem..
Regards

ShonEjai said...

It was a lovely poem to compliment a beautiful photo prompt. Well done!

izzy said...

Like it! and it isn't sad- wistful
but steamy too!

Other Mary said...

Wow - 55, acrostic and rhyme...kudos!

Monkey Man said...

Cleverly created.

Jyoti Mishra said...

that was very witty !!

I enjoyed it. Nice read

patcegan said...

Acrostic is a style I have not done much. Thanks for the reminder. I like your poem a lot! hugs, pat

Alice Audrey said...

I always wanted to have one of those summer flings, but either it wouldn't take at all or he got way too serious so it ended up not being a fling.

Lydia said...

Oh, it was like a trip back in time! Been there. Done that. (Wish I could do that again!)

Francisca said...

Summers are for hot young passions... I can sure relate to this acrostic.

Jinksy said...

Very clever treatment of the prompt.♥

gautami tripathy said...

Wonderfully written..

stapled maples

frayedges said...

Great acrostic!

Olivia said...

SIGH!!!!!!

hugs xo

Strummed Words said...

End of summer blues - I liked the seascape too.

Jenny said...

Oh wow. What a neat little rhyme and a perfect illustration.

This was so visual and charming.

Thanks for sharing your talents here.

A+

Anonymous said...

Lovely Summer Vacation Poem ...and just 55 words sum it up elegantly :)

Ed Pilolla said...

i really like this a lot:)

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