Summer is leaving tomorrow,
Usha's heart is filled with sorrow;
Met him during her summer vacation,
Made best friends with no hesitation;
Everyday, they've spent quality time together,
Relaxing!
.
Volcanic passions gather,
A romance's cooking;
Can't help feeling
And caring,
They made love
Inside a sailboat,
Oh, my,
Now, time to let it go afloat.
Alphabe-Thursday (V=Vacation, Very Rare One )
Poetry Jam (Sea Adventure)
Flash Friday 55 with Mr. Knowitall: Write a fiction, a poem or a story, share..
46 comments:
You have a way with words! Well done...
Like the sailboat image - would't mind it myself!
Anna :o]
Sounds like a great summer vacation to me!
This is terrific!!
Thanks for visiting my white rose!
Ah, the joy and heartbreak of a summer romance! You certainly spelled it out creatively!!!
awesome... swift journey :)
Great V word and poem
Great poem about a summer romance.
Oh the heartbreak! Great take on the prompt!
Good job. I like very much "inside a sailboat" and "now it's time to let it go afloat".
I always think it so clever to do that, but when the result is a poem that has integrity and is not forced, like this one it's amazing!
What a summer tale! You told so much in so few words!
Well done on an exscellent clever write,
Have a good day.
Yvonne.
Like it. Very clever.
sounds great!
love this
~Jo
Beautiful pics and words :)
Oh dear. Summer's over. Time to let go...
Cute.
=)
beautiful write
Nice poem,indeed!
I can imagine you miss it all now. I remember feeling this way.
very inaginitive combining of the prompts into a wonderful poem!
dani
Let's hope she's the one with the sailboat! :)
This was a fantastic piece of Literary Art!
Loved your 55 My Friend
Thank You for sharing.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
nice....summer love...and making love on a sail boat is def a big hit...
You totally owned the post!! Lovely piece of writing. Great creativity :D
Keep 'em coming!! Thanks for visiting my blog:)
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Well written.
It was a lovely poem to compliment a beautiful photo prompt. Well done!
Like it! and it isn't sad- wistful
but steamy too!
Wow - 55, acrostic and rhyme...kudos!
Cleverly created.
that was very witty !!
I enjoyed it. Nice read
Acrostic is a style I have not done much. Thanks for the reminder. I like your poem a lot! hugs, pat
I always wanted to have one of those summer flings, but either it wouldn't take at all or he got way too serious so it ended up not being a fling.
Oh, it was like a trip back in time! Been there. Done that. (Wish I could do that again!)
Summers are for hot young passions... I can sure relate to this acrostic.
Very clever treatment of the prompt.♥
Wonderfully written..
stapled maples
Great acrostic!
SIGH!!!!!!
hugs xo
End of summer blues - I liked the seascape too.
Oh wow. What a neat little rhyme and a perfect illustration.
This was so visual and charming.
Thanks for sharing your talents here.
A+
Lovely Summer Vacation Poem ...and just 55 words sum it up elegantly :)
i really like this a lot:)
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