Sunday, September 19, 2010

Creative Fire



Flinging out of the furnace
R the flames
That leap forward,
With No sound,
The intense desire
Of the fire
Bursts like a hungry hound,
Searching and wolfing down preys
On the hunting ground.
Creative fire
Has NO patience,
Carries NO weight.
Creative fire,
Starts from sparks of flint,
Burns from the deepest part
Of your heart
In thousand of degree
And sets you free
In unexpected way!

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48 comments:

Sam Liu said...

Wonderful poem, with a great rhythm. And I love the photograph!

JBSTUFF said...

Now that is one hot poem.

Claudia said...

love it jingle! and how we all need it - love the lines
Has NO patience,
Carries NO weight
that's fantastic
you inspire!!!

welcome to my world of poetry said...

Wonderful as always Jingle.

Yvonne.

Mama Zen said...

Nice, Jingle!

Caty said...

love it as always :)

Katherine said...

Love this Jingle! Lovely poem!

Lourie said...

You've done it again!!

Diane T said...

What a pretty kitty! And the words were lovely too, Jingle!

Sherry Blue Sky said...

I think this is my favorite of your poems so far! Wonderful read! Inspiring too........my fire is more like embers these days, that need a lot of blowing on to make spark up.......but I Remember When, hee hee!

signed...bkm said...

Really like this ...the flame and the fire...bkm

Muthering Heights said...

Another good one!

Amanda said...

The fire and the flame...makes a perfect conbination in this very fine poem Ji...you have done it again!!!! Thanks so much x

RiikaInfinityy said...

Wow I love it!:3 And that is such a cute cat<3<3<3 meow~~ Wonderfully written once again Jingle, rhythm it on XD

croleyc69 said...

Simply lovely as always !!!

Caroline

Myrna R. said...

Lovely. The kind of fire we want to burn.

Cute cat.

ruchiballal said...

Hi Jingle - Nice poem! keep it up :)

JStar said...

This is on fire....

M.L. Gallagher said...

I am thrilled to make your acquaintance here -- and for your visit to my blog and invitation!

I am off to the Pantry to check out what poetical choices await!

Thank you Jingle!

Louise

umamaheswari anandane said...

Loved your Poem.Hot Hot Fire Poem presented in a beautiful way

हेमंत कुमार ♠ Hemant Kumar said...

It's nice poetry in very simpe and attractive words.
Hemant

Harnett-Hargrove said...

Great! There is a resonance here. -J

Leo said...

well written.. loved it..! :) shape, flow and verse all went very well! :D

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JamieDedes said...

How truly you have poemed here, Ji. Well done... and I love the little kitty. Made me smile ... Thanks!

annell said...

Yes, wonderful and cute kitty!

Stafford Ray said...

"Burns from the deepest part
Of your heart". Yes it does. And "... sets you free
In unexpected way(s)!"
A good example of how poetry can express what prose fails to include!

Rajlakshmi said...

lovely post Jingle :)

william said...

good lines in this well written poem dear xx

Missy said...

I really enjoy the traipse through your words here. A poetic stroll for sure.

flaubert said...

Pretty poem and I love the pic of the kitty!
Pamela

Square Corner said...

Intensely creative. Glad I read it.

Kristen Haskell said...

That is awesome. Know that I dislike the slang of that word "Aewsome" so I try not to use it. I mean to say that your poem rings so true. Creative fire burns white hot and not when you actually expect it because it is serendipitious. You nailed it here.

Sarah said...

Thanks for this, I needed some inspiration.

Wild Rose said...

Wow i love that the creative fire in us sets us free and ablaze like nothing in this world, you made me suddenly get charged with creativity just by those encouraging words Jingle x

Bing (PinkLady) said...

indeed, creativity sets us free! this is lovely, jingle!

TALON said...

I love how creativity works and you captured that feeling perfectly, Jingle. You never know where it will go and that's the fun of it all!

joanny said...

This is difficult style then your usual, and it come out excellent. Love all your poems, but especially like this one.

Joanny

Kavita said...

I just needed this kind of encouragement right now, Jingle!! WOW!! You write the perfect words for my mood! YOU ROCK!!!

This poem is just too good! Creative sparks flying all over the place now! Need to get hold of them, before my head catches fire.. :)

penelopephoebe said...

Oh yeah, I like this poem. It has a wonderful flow!

senderupwords said...

My favourite line is "had NO patience." Love and Light, Sender

Jen said...

I could use a flame like that...to set me free...

Collective Epiphanies said...

I love the way you captured the essence of that creative spark. Very poignant and yes, that fire has no patience. It comes when it comes and we better be prepared with our sword(pen)and shield (paper) :) We must nurture it or else the flame will die out. Something to be cherished.

Thanks so much for reading my humble stuff and inviting me to the Potluck! I am definitely joining!

Victoria said...

Creativity is like a fire and it just has to be set free or it can destroy you!

Amy said...

Have a great day...

The Write Girl said...

Beautiful poem. I really enjoyed the imagery...thanks for the invitation to potluck. I wasn't online until late tonight but appreciate the thought. Have an awesome week :)

Annie said...

Filled with urgent energy. Each read was very intense.

EG Wow said...

Beautiful verse.

Lynette Killam said...

I love this poem, Jingle. Creative fire that 'burns from the deepest part of your heart'...well, that says it all!
Creativity does indeed set us free...:)