Lost in the sea
With towering waves
Blocking my way,
2 God I pray,
Please halt my grieves
by leading the way
2 a safe and sound bay.
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An Entry 4 Micro-fiction Monday at Stony River By Susan:
http://www.stonyriver.ie/2010/09/microfiction-monday-47.html
and an entry 4 Blue Monday:
http://smilingsally.blogspot.com/2010/09/blue-monday-happy-labor-day.html
Happy Labor Day,
Happy Monday!
43 comments:
Beautiful blues.
Happy Blue Monday, Jingle! Check out my book giveaway.
Jingle I love the Imagery of this poem. It reminds me of days gone by when I learned to surf in Hawaii. Man did I ever want for the safe sand of land lol.
It would be so scary to be lost at sea and a relief to gain a safe harbor. Lovely, Jingle.
And I'm betting prayers like that get answered. :)
A beautiful song you've given us! :O)
Beautiful poem.
Not all of us surf in the ocean, but we all do tackle huge waves in life.
Thanks for this.
Amen! We're all on those waves, reaching for shore!
A Beautifully crafted poem. Have a wonderful week.
This was lovely. Have a wonderful week. Cheers!
Happy Blue Monday Jingle Sweetie...
My what a wonderful share today. You are such a talented writer. I love the poem and the photos you chose are just perfect.
Yes what a beautiful blue Monday. Happy Labor Day sweet friend.
Many hugs and much love, Sherry
A beautiful post, in word, image and sentiment.
to a safe and sound bay…so beautiful jingle!
the water looks inviting..
such beautiful words
and an ever true request
wonderful Jingle
Beautiful pics
Loved your post today. You have a very nice blog and are very talented.
It's poetry---photograph---life---philosphy and so many things --that can we imagine.Nice and beautiful.
Hemant
Beautiful, refreshing poem, Jingle. And I love the pictures - blue is my favourite colour :)
Lovely, Jingle! I started my visits backwards today so I'm so glad I began with you!
I like your poem. We all have waves that block our way at times or even threaten to overwhelm us, but God will carry us through if we give it over to Him.
Happy Blue Day Jingle, enjoy the poem very much.
Have a good day.
Yvonne.
Excellent my friend and very beautiful :)
Beautiful!!!!
;)
a poem in blue Thanks for dropping by to read my 140. Sorry for the delay but dealing with drama of son having to dash across Italy to catch his flight. Hope your week goes better then his!
Love the way your write my friend and today's MF is no different.
Just beautiful !
Very nice, Jingle. Prayer is good at a time like this. My boatsman said a prayer using HiTech, to the wrong god. :)
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sometimes it answers everything, well done xxx
Amen! This is a prayer for every day turbulence.
Lovely poem!
great post "killing two birds" with one post. :)
Jingle Belle...
Loved the story and the pics...
Thanks
Wonderful, Jingle...absolutely wonderful!
Wonderful.. Beautiful Blues...
--Someone Is Special--
Such beautiful blues . I loved it so much !!
Caroline
Lovely =) And thanks for following!
Very nice take on this MFM. Beautiful pictures too.
Thanks for all your kind comments on my blog.
PG
Wow great writing as ever. Have a wonderful Tuesday..
Hope you get there!
Great poem/prayer, Jingle! I particularly like the "please halt my grieves" line.
Have a great week.
thats a lovely poem... :)
nice microfiction :)
That first photo is making me want to jump on a plane headed for Hawaii.
Our fears come calm near
With God and the guidance here
We get led back to our inner being
As it is the Soul doing the seeing
So as we come to grips with it is to be
We will never be lost like we were out at sea
enjoy and Happy Tuesday to ya Jingle(+)
soulbro*:)xo--{--@
a prayer, a poem, a photo or two :-) and finally relief, very nice!
Beautiful..
Loved it.
Thanks for commenting on my MM.
Cheers :)
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