Saturday, September 25, 2010

I Love The Smell of Autumn

I Love The Smell Of Autumn!

Stretching
its wings in full length,
Breathing
in the air with the strongest strength,
She rise,
Glide...




All over the world, the inspiration,
The magical touch of compassion,
Marks down the blasting fame of the peony,
The queen of purity,
novelty,
and maturity.
.
The crisp orange color,
The thundering beat of humming bird wings,
The smell of festivity,
Evoke the satisfaction of life,
The upgrade of writings,
And the magic of overcoming adversity.

*****

Six Word Saturday:
http://www.showmyface.com/2010/09/six-word-saturday_25.html


Monday Poetry Potluck Week 3: (Linking Open Sunday 8pm to Tuesday, 8pm)
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/


Thursday Thinking Tank at Poets United (Autumn):
http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/2010/09/thursday-tink-tank-prompt-16.html


Happy Writing,
Happy Blogging,
Happy Weekend!

43 comments:

Nora Johnson said...

Hi again!

Have a good weekend,

LOLA:)

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welcome to my world of poetry said...

We have a beautiful sunny Autumn day, crispness in the air ,
Wonderful poem about a wonderful season.

Enjoy your week-end.

Yvonne.

Sam Liu said...

Beautiful, Jingle, I love the personification of autumn. And you perfectly capture her grace and wonder.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

I think I smell the same fragrance you do!

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Sherry Blue Sky said...

Very evocative.....I love the smell of autumn! And I love your vision of compassion spreading world wide......may it be so!

Thom said...

Excellent my friend :)

lakeviewer said...

"..and the magic of overcoming adversity." Wow!

Rajlakshmi said...

wonderful write Jingle :)

हेमंत कुमार ♠ Hemant Kumar said...

The crisp orange color,
The thundering beat of humming bird wings,
The smell of festivity,
Evoke the satisfaction of life,
The upgrade of writings,
And the magic of overcoming adversity.

Excellent--these lines shows your love and attraction for nature.
Hemant

Myrna R. said...

Yes, we must evoke the magic of overcoming adversity.

Elaine said...

Me too, I love the smell of autumn. We've got one of those sunny crisp days here and autumn is just around the corner.

ChrisAu said...

Have a great weekend and enjoy your autumn!

Velvet Over Steel said...

I love your perspective and imagery of Autumn! Loved this post! I needed some motivation to decorate for fall. Thank you for getting me in the mood! :-)

Hope you have a wonderful weekend!
HUGS,
Coreen

croleyc69 said...

Awesome my friend. You do this so well.

Caroline

william said...

great autumn poem, getting chilly here brrrr xx

Princess said...

I love autumns ! they are great aren't they :D

liked the poem .......
have a great Sunday :)

Ellie said...

I love it, so pretty and reflective of the season! I love you added the hummingbird, they leave here before fall begins, but not this year~
Wonderful Poem~

Crystal Mary said...

You are in Autumn and we are into spring...isn't it amazing!!
I can leave all the windows open accept the ones without screens at night. Otherwise we might get a python in for a surprise visit. The change in seasons is always nice, wouldn't it be boring if they stayed the same. Hugs to you.

ds said...

Autumn as a bird--what a lovely image. Wonderful wonderful poem. Thank you.

gospelwriter said...

you cover a lot of autumn's magic in few words - love it!

flaubert said...

Love this Jingle!
Pamela

Carina said...

I love autumn too!

Melissa B. said...

Just lovely. Bravo!

Teresa said...

This is lovely. I love your description of fall. It truly is a magical season.

Eaton Bennett said...

Hey Jingle, this is a really beautiful piece of poetry. :))

Muthering Heights said...

You've captured it very well!

RiikaInfinityy said...

Autumn is the great joy!=P

fiveloaf said...

is that lady lying down you?

Someone Is Special said...

Beautiful.. I loved the smell of your Autumn..

--Someone Is Special--

TALON said...

This was lyrical and magical. Really enjoyed this! I love the smell of autumn too.

anne said...

A great poem about autumn. I heard it is the best season of the year

Together We Save said...

Wonderful!! Hope you had a gereat weekend!

umamaheswari anandane said...

lovely autumn

The crisp orange color,
The thundering beat of humming bird wings,
The smell of festivity,
enjoy1
:)

Victoria said...

Me too! I was going to bring in the hummingbird feeder this morning but my husband said he's still seeing them. But I saw a leaf fall...

Lu Ann said...

Aww! I really love autumn too. The colors, the smell, the noises, the reality...

Judy Roney said...

I am going to bank on "The upgrade of writings,
And the magic of overcoming adversity."
and believe it for myself as well. I love your take on Autumn.

Kavita said...

Oohh..that was THE perfect ode to Autumn, Jingle! Amazing!
The last stanza was deliciously good!!
Brilliant imagery here, girl!! Wowww..

Write on, girlfriend... and may these festivities continue!! :)

Georgina Dollface said...

Me too! It is my favourite season ever! Right now though, it seems to be in limbo. The air is hovering between the hot summer temperatures and the cool wetness of Autumn which means it is a little muggy around here. But soon the colourful leaves will start to show up and it will all be worth it! - G

Leo said...

beautiful autumn you have portrayed, Jingle! :)

reetam said...

lovely, lovely words. i can almost feel the rustle of falling leaves in them...

Lynette Killam said...

I too, love Autumn and the 'smell of festivity'! This is a beautifully uplifting poem with your wish that compassion be spread world-wide. We must believe it will be so one day...:)

Shashi said...

Beautifully picturised... and I was walking along the path with the humming birds and earth full of orange colors... Love th vivid image...

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JamieDedes said...

Well done, Ji. As crisp, clean, and clear as an autumn day.

Thanks for linking it to potluck.