I Love The Smell Of Autumn!Stretching
its wings in full length,
Breathing
in the air with the strongest strength,
She rise,
Glide...
All over the world, the inspiration,
The magical touch of compassion,
Marks down the blasting fame of the peony,
The queen of purity,
novelty,
and maturity.
.
The crisp orange color,
The thundering beat of humming bird wings,
The smell of festivity,
Evoke the satisfaction of life,
The upgrade of writings,
And the magic of overcoming adversity.
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Six Word Saturday:
http://www.showmyface.com/2010/09/six-word-saturday_25.html
Monday Poetry Potluck Week 3: (Linking Open Sunday 8pm to Tuesday, 8pm)
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/
Thursday Thinking Tank at Poets United (Autumn):
http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/2010/09/thursday-tink-tank-prompt-16.html
Happy Writing,
Happy Blogging,
Happy Weekend!
43 comments:
Hi again!
Have a good weekend,
LOLA:)
”Fashions Fade but Style is Eternal” (Yves St Laurent)
We have a beautiful sunny Autumn day, crispness in the air ,
Wonderful poem about a wonderful season.
Enjoy your week-end.
Yvonne.
Beautiful, Jingle, I love the personification of autumn. And you perfectly capture her grace and wonder.
I think I smell the same fragrance you do!
6WS: It’d Take a Book
Very evocative.....I love the smell of autumn! And I love your vision of compassion spreading world wide......may it be so!
Excellent my friend :)
"..and the magic of overcoming adversity." Wow!
wonderful write Jingle :)
The crisp orange color,
The thundering beat of humming bird wings,
The smell of festivity,
Evoke the satisfaction of life,
The upgrade of writings,
And the magic of overcoming adversity.
Excellent--these lines shows your love and attraction for nature.
Hemant
Yes, we must evoke the magic of overcoming adversity.
Me too, I love the smell of autumn. We've got one of those sunny crisp days here and autumn is just around the corner.
Have a great weekend and enjoy your autumn!
I love your perspective and imagery of Autumn! Loved this post! I needed some motivation to decorate for fall. Thank you for getting me in the mood! :-)
Hope you have a wonderful weekend!
HUGS,
Coreen
Awesome my friend. You do this so well.
Caroline
great autumn poem, getting chilly here brrrr xx
I love autumns ! they are great aren't they :D
liked the poem .......
have a great Sunday :)
I love it, so pretty and reflective of the season! I love you added the hummingbird, they leave here before fall begins, but not this year~
Wonderful Poem~
You are in Autumn and we are into spring...isn't it amazing!!
I can leave all the windows open accept the ones without screens at night. Otherwise we might get a python in for a surprise visit. The change in seasons is always nice, wouldn't it be boring if they stayed the same. Hugs to you.
Autumn as a bird--what a lovely image. Wonderful wonderful poem. Thank you.
you cover a lot of autumn's magic in few words - love it!
Love this Jingle!
Pamela
I love autumn too!
Just lovely. Bravo!
This is lovely. I love your description of fall. It truly is a magical season.
Hey Jingle, this is a really beautiful piece of poetry. :))
You've captured it very well!
Autumn is the great joy!=P
is that lady lying down you?
Beautiful.. I loved the smell of your Autumn..
--Someone Is Special--
This was lyrical and magical. Really enjoyed this! I love the smell of autumn too.
A great poem about autumn. I heard it is the best season of the year
Wonderful!! Hope you had a gereat weekend!
lovely autumn
The crisp orange color,
The thundering beat of humming bird wings,
The smell of festivity,
enjoy1
:)
Me too! I was going to bring in the hummingbird feeder this morning but my husband said he's still seeing them. But I saw a leaf fall...
Aww! I really love autumn too. The colors, the smell, the noises, the reality...
I am going to bank on "The upgrade of writings,
And the magic of overcoming adversity."
and believe it for myself as well. I love your take on Autumn.
Oohh..that was THE perfect ode to Autumn, Jingle! Amazing!
The last stanza was deliciously good!!
Brilliant imagery here, girl!! Wowww..
Write on, girlfriend... and may these festivities continue!! :)
Me too! It is my favourite season ever! Right now though, it seems to be in limbo. The air is hovering between the hot summer temperatures and the cool wetness of Autumn which means it is a little muggy around here. But soon the colourful leaves will start to show up and it will all be worth it! - G
beautiful autumn you have portrayed, Jingle! :)
lovely, lovely words. i can almost feel the rustle of falling leaves in them...
I too, love Autumn and the 'smell of festivity'! This is a beautifully uplifting poem with your wish that compassion be spread world-wide. We must believe it will be so one day...:)
Beautifully picturised... and I was walking along the path with the humming birds and earth full of orange colors... Love th vivid image...
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Om Namah Shivaya
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Well done, Ji. As crisp, clean, and clear as an autumn day.
Thanks for linking it to potluck.
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