His fiancé refuses to marry him unless
he becomes a scholar in the U. S.,
He works hard
and comes aboard,
He meets someone smart,
and feel adored.
One is classically traditional,
Another is modernized and practical,
He loves both women,
but can only marry one,
Three hearts broken
as he decides to marry none.
*****
This is a fiction created out of imagination...it may hit some facts in reality.
An entry 4 G-Man’s Flash Friday 55, Please check other participants here:
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Happy Weekend!
21 comments:
Great 55. Not the ending I was thinking was going to happen. Well done.
Sad tale, but I guess to often true. Nice write.
A gloomy poem but you have written it very well... :)
Well that's one way to handle it! Great 55
A good 55. loved the read.
Take care.
Yvonne.
Love it !! sad but great job.
Caroline
seems like a wise decision he made even though it meant breaking his own heart...he will know the meaning later on in his life...enjoy as well my Dearest Jingle and Happy Friday to ya(+)
soulbro*;)xo---[--@
aww.. life can be cruel!
Jingle Belle...
Excellent 55. Not too happy, but excellent!
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
Awww! And I was hoping for a happy ending, Jingle!
Great 55!
And one has to wonder if that's the best decision...
Great 55!
Unless he moves to certain places in Utah! lol. Great 55!
Sad indeed. Someday, all the hearts will be mended. Think positive, Anni, think positive. LOL
My Flash 55 is posted Scroll down below my show n tell for Friday to find it.
Have a great weekend.
hope he wont miss both of them some day!
If i was him I would have married the second one, who loved me without any conditions attached to that love.
trisha
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Well, at least he didn't marry BOTH! Funny but sad 55, Jingle!
Oh that is sad.. I hope you have a great weekend.
It hits so many facts I thought I knew who it was about! Superbly done.
ah - what a tragedy...but maybe better for all three of them...?
Not fun, but very true! thanks!
Oh, my heart's broken just reading about it! I hope it's not a true story. Too sad!
oh!! so sad!! its really hurt
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