Thursday, December 16, 2010

55-Three Hearts Broken



His fiancé refuses to marry him unless
he becomes a scholar in the U. S.,
He works hard
and comes aboard,
He meets someone smart,
and feel adored.
One is classically traditional,
Another is modernized and practical,
He loves both women,
but can only marry one,
Three hearts broken
as he decides to marry none.

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This is a fiction created out of imagination...it may hit some facts in reality.
An entry 4 G-Man’s Flash Friday 55, Please check other participants here:
G-Man’s Flash Friday 55
Happy Weekend!

21 comments:

Thom said...

Great 55. Not the ending I was thinking was going to happen. Well done.

Myrna R. said...

Sad tale, but I guess to often true. Nice write.

Sumit Sarkar said...

A gloomy poem but you have written it very well... :)

AmyLK said...

Well that's one way to handle it! Great 55

welcome to my world of poetry said...

A good 55. loved the read.

Take care.
Yvonne.

croleyc69 said...

Love it !! sad but great job.

Caroline

Dom* said...

seems like a wise decision he made even though it meant breaking his own heart...he will know the meaning later on in his life...enjoy as well my Dearest Jingle and Happy Friday to ya(+)
soulbro*;)xo---[--@

magiceye said...

aww.. life can be cruel!

G-Man said...

Jingle Belle...
Excellent 55. Not too happy, but excellent!
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

TALON said...

Awww! And I was hoping for a happy ending, Jingle!

Great 55!

Belinda said...

And one has to wonder if that's the best decision...
Great 55!

sheila said...

Unless he moves to certain places in Utah! lol. Great 55!

HOOTIN' ANNI said...

Sad indeed. Someday, all the hearts will be mended. Think positive, Anni, think positive. LOL

My Flash 55 is posted Scroll down below my show n tell for Friday to find it.

Have a great weekend.

Anonymous said...

hope he wont miss both of them some day!

If i was him I would have married the second one, who loved me without any conditions attached to that love.

trisha
mydomainpvt.wordpress.com

Eric Alder said...

Well, at least he didn't marry BOTH! Funny but sad 55, Jingle!

Amy said...

Oh that is sad.. I hope you have a great weekend.

Dave King said...

It hits so many facts I thought I knew who it was about! Superbly done.

Claudia said...

ah - what a tragedy...but maybe better for all three of them...?

izzy said...

Not fun, but very true! thanks!

JamieDedes said...

Oh, my heart's broken just reading about it! I hope it's not a true story. Too sad!

rosell barbarona said...

oh!! so sad!! its really hurt