Thursday, December 2, 2010

A Weird Poem In 55 Words




Yes,
You can worship me,
but,
You need to carry your own identity.
I see,
You cannot please everybody,
I agree,
You certainly will become somebody.
No,
You don't have to fear those foes,
Yet,
You do need to make friends with pros.
Go,
Reach 4 the star,
Follow
Me, while driving your own car.


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I feel weird to write this one, but it fits the following memes:

G-Man’s Flash Friday 55

and

Thursday Thinking Tank (Weird)

Happy Writing!
Happy December!

31 comments:

Eric Alder said...

Hey, how did you know I worship you? (LOL!)

Pretty weird, Jingle! But it seems to make sense to me.

(Maybe that's because I'm so weird?)

Old Ollie said...

Mission accomplished. Like Eric's take.

Myrna R. said...

Weird is good. We all have more than our share, we just cover it up with normalcy. I like what you wrote.

lynnaima said...

lol, I like it, quite original :)
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/

Sherry Blue Sky said...

I love "but you need to carry your own identity". Cool poem.

Rinkly Rimes said...

There's something pretty important here....... follow others but drive your own car!

Poets United said...

Isn't it fun how even when you are purposefully being weird it can make sense?

ocdbloggergirl said...

It is weird, but great. It gives one the idea that even if you have a hero, you should go on your own way in life.
Lisa

Together We Save said...

It is different!! But fun!!

Eileen T O'Neill ..... said...

Jingle,
A poem with a positive inside to it!
Some weirdness attached also.
I enjoyed reading this very much and all in 55 words!

Best wishes, Eileen

THE BEATY said...

awsome. Turned out great

TALON said...

The message I get is -- "be true to yourself" and that's an awesome message, Jingle.

G-Man said...

Jingle Belle...
Make sure you buckle your seat belt.
Most excellent 55.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

Teresa said...

You say weird. I say fun! Like this one.

haisley said...

Ji, this poemis a little bit different....

croleyc69 said...

It's different but I def like it !!

Caroline

Cinner said...

Seems to make sense to me too in an odd way. I liked it.

Coloring Outside the Lines said...

I don't think this is weird at all..rockin' that 55!

HOOTIN' ANNI said...

As long as they don't follow so closely they're on my bumper!!


My 55 is posted!! Here is the link for you.

Someone Is Special said...

This is too good ji.. Well I am missing Thursday Poets Rally this week due to the tight schedule in office Ji..

--Someone is Special--

annell said...

Jingle bells, jingle bells, it is your season. And thanks for the little gift you left at my site. And here's one for you in return, liked your write about weird. Thank you.

Anonymous said...

well, it might be weird but it was beautiful too. :)

trisha
mydomainpvt.wordpress.com

imaginationlane said...

I loved the rhythm to this piece, Jingle! It's a little bit weird, and a whole lot inspiring...very clever altogether...:)

nana_ang_poppaphil said...

Hmm, yes a little weird, but fun too.

And like Myrna said, weird is good, nothing wrong with weird, there's some in all of us.

Missy said...

Can you send me a link to the rally? I'll bookmark this time. Work has been crazy and illness prevails.

I'll be happy to read and comment on others poetry though.

Kitty Moore said...

Very thought provoking!

Dom* said...

cute poem my Dearest Jingle and also to the point in the end...LOL...enjoy and Happy Saturday to ya as well(+)
soulbro*:)xo---{--@

Princess said...

I like this one :) A very happy December to you too :)

JamieDedes said...

Excellent. Something every young person should read.

Follow me but drive your own care. Fabulous!

Claudia said...

you can not please everybody...so true...we shouldn't even try but rather try finding our way on this highway

tinkwelborn said...

Independence I hear here -- Here! Here!
tis a funny jingle, to be true...but it was fun to read and follow.

Open message in a free format.
thank you for sharing.