Sunday, February 13, 2011

Love Is Unpredictable (4 Poetry Potluck Week 22)



Love could be ridiculous,
also very adventurous.
.
Love could make you blind,
especially when it blows like forceful wind.
.
And love is romantic,
Yet it may not be always authentic.
.
As we want conditions,
We start to have contradictions.
.
Love is no more free
When two souls disagree.
.
When love is gone
We weep and frown.
.
Love is unpredictable,
Life without love is miserable.

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Jingle Poetry Potluck Week 22, Theme:Love, Bonds, and Relationships, Happy Valentine's Day, Come Joining Us Today Poetry Potluck Week 22, Everyone Is Welcome

48 comments:

Personalized Sketches and Sentiments said...

Ah...yes Love! Unpredictable at times...and yes, Love is what we all need...at all times.

Blessings & Aloha!
Thank you for popping by and for your best wishes :o)

Debora said...

Wouldn't predictable make it boring?

Happy Valentine's Day.

Iwrite4u said...

True..love is unpredictable.It has two extremes and in what we fall depends upon the person we love!!!

Evelyn said...

Very nice...
fun theme!

Cheryl said...

How true, Jingle. Love is unpredictable but where would we be without it? :-)

Lyn said...

Yes, the adventure..every word completely true!!

Kavita said...

each and every word is so true, jingle!! Perfectly said, my dear..

Love is truly ALL of this!! But love is AWESOME too!!! :))

S Bird said...

Romantic but not necessarily authentic- isn't that the curse of the modern single!


Here from the potluck. Here's my offering: http://shawnbird.com/2011/02/13/your-smile/

Shigune Matsui said...

Yup. Love make speople do crazy things indeed, am I right? Here;s mine http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com/2011/02/amoracounterproducterine.html

1meremortal said...

Sometimes I think the unpredictability of love can make it that much more desirable.

A great poem.

scentofmyheart said...

Love is what makes us go ... very wise words Ji!

Bossy Betty said...

Thanks, Jingle and happy Valentine's Day to you!

Rekha said...

Love is pretty unpredictable but that's what makes it worthwhile. lovely... Happy Valentine's Day

Caroline said...

Very beautiful !!
Happy Valentines Day !!

sam said...

Love is Life...Beautiful poem Happy Valentines.

Cinner said...

I really enjoyed this today. you never know what is around the corner.
may you have a great day.

fiveloaf said...

couldn't agree more ji.. here's mine.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/05/11/happily-tied/

irene said...

You hit the nail on the head about love Jingle. Nicely done.

Chim's World of Literature said...

this was a lovely poem..esp the part that life without love is miserable.

kenny said...

The image of ridiculous love! Very playful.

OGUNGBESAN MICHAEL said...

I BUY THIS, LOVE IS SO UNPREDICTABLE EVEN IN ITS SIMPLICITY. THANKS FOR SHARING

Krislin Neo, Ting (Syracuse Pike) said...

I love this.. Especially about when two people disagree and what you expressed on the conditions.. :)

Happy Valentine... :)

N here are my two entires..
http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/02/collections-of-tings-poetry-tpf105.html

http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/02/collections-of-tings-poetry-tpf106-you.html

Hope to see you.. :)

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budh.aaah said...

Love in all its colors here :)

Lolamouse said...

This is what makes love such fun and why it never grows old! Thanks for sharing, Jingle!

dakshi said...

Liked it very very much...

Myrna R. said...

Love makes us human and a little crazy at times. Nice.

amritaghosh said...

love is romantic, but may not always be authentic! true that Ji :-) very true. HVD to you lady!

jessicasjapes said...

That poem runs along delightfully, Jingle!
Love is certainly unpredictable.

Julie Jordan Scott said...

Viva the unpredictability!

Your words inspire, Jingle.

Thanks for commenting on my duck-poetry-love!

http://juliejordanscott.typepad.com/jjspoetry/2011/02/duck-love-for-valentines-day.html

dan roberson said...

Love makes the world go around,
If we keep our feet on the ground,
If we let our love fly away,
We'll be empty for many days,
If we let our love overflow,
We won't waste time feeling low,
For you, Jingle, I want to say, May you be blessed this Valentine's Day!

Butterflies of time said...

Loved it jingle . You are so right Conditions do lead to contradictions, if u love me then i will love u ha ha.yet love is all the heart desires. Happy V day to u.

heartspell said...

Very well said on all aspects of love.... Happy Valentine's Day with love and joy to you....

Chris said...

So true! But it's all worth it in the end, I think

Missy said...

Love's journey is often wrought with many highs and loves, but oh what a journey it is.

I enjoyed your offering Jingle.

Mary said...

Unpredictable is right!

Margaret said...

... but who wants to live without love, even though it can be difficult. ;)

Coffee Break Mama said...

Very nice! Thanks for sharing :)

JamieDedes said...

Fabulous Valentine's Day Potluck Poem ... Love makes the world go round...and sometimes upside down! LOL!

This is very fine, Ji.

Have a great day ...

Dragon Katet said...

All simple truths about love. Like the slant rhymes, too! :) Happy <3 Day!

♥-Icy BC-♥ said...

Beautiful poem of love!

abthomas said...

That one line "it may not be authentic" - utterly brilliant

Sumit Sarkar said...

hard truths about love...
wonderfully written :)

Jingles said...

WOW, great reading, i just love your thoughts, thanks for posting.

Dom* said...

in Love, it always has balance and from this balance growth will always be of that...as this is growth one then Ascends higher in their own Consciousness.....great poem Jingle...Happy Thursday to you as well(+)
soulbro*;)xoxoxo---{--@

JamieDedes said...

A very dear and true poem. Good work here, JI.

trisha said...

very very lovely jingle. you said almost every thing about love.

Jaan Pehchaan said...

Yes, it makes us feel as if we are running high on dopamine!

Wonderfully written!