Love could be ridiculous,
also very adventurous.
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Love could make you blind,
especially when it blows like forceful wind.
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And love is romantic,
Yet it may not be always authentic.
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As we want conditions,
We start to have contradictions.
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Love is no more free
When two souls disagree.
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When love is gone
We weep and frown.
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Love is unpredictable,
Life without love is miserable.
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Jingle Poetry Potluck Week 22, Theme:Love, Bonds, and Relationships, Happy Valentine's Day, Come Joining Us Today Poetry Potluck Week 22, Everyone Is Welcome
47 comments:
Ah...yes Love! Unpredictable at times...and yes, Love is what we all need...at all times.
Blessings & Aloha!
Thank you for popping by and for your best wishes :o)
Wouldn't predictable make it boring?
Happy Valentine's Day.
True..love is unpredictable.It has two extremes and in what we fall depends upon the person we love!!!
Very nice...
fun theme!
How true, Jingle. Love is unpredictable but where would we be without it? :-)
Yes, the adventure..every word completely true!!
each and every word is so true, jingle!! Perfectly said, my dear..
Love is truly ALL of this!! But love is AWESOME too!!! :))
Romantic but not necessarily authentic- isn't that the curse of the modern single!
Here from the potluck. Here's my offering: http://shawnbird.com/2011/02/13/your-smile/
Yup. Love make speople do crazy things indeed, am I right? Here;s mine http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com/2011/02/amoracounterproducterine.html
Sometimes I think the unpredictability of love can make it that much more desirable.
A great poem.
Love is what makes us go ... very wise words Ji!
Thanks, Jingle and happy Valentine's Day to you!
Love is pretty unpredictable but that's what makes it worthwhile. lovely... Happy Valentine's Day
Very beautiful !!
Happy Valentines Day !!
Love is Life...Beautiful poem Happy Valentines.
I really enjoyed this today. you never know what is around the corner.
may you have a great day.
couldn't agree more ji.. here's mine.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/05/11/happily-tied/
You hit the nail on the head about love Jingle. Nicely done.
this was a lovely poem..esp the part that life without love is miserable.
The image of ridiculous love! Very playful.
I BUY THIS, LOVE IS SO UNPREDICTABLE EVEN IN ITS SIMPLICITY. THANKS FOR SHARING
I love this.. Especially about when two people disagree and what you expressed on the conditions.. :)
Happy Valentine... :)
N here are my two entires..
http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/02/collections-of-tings-poetry-tpf105.html
http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/02/collections-of-tings-poetry-tpf106-you.html
Hope to see you.. :)
Love in all its colors here :)
This is what makes love such fun and why it never grows old! Thanks for sharing, Jingle!
Liked it very very much...
Love makes us human and a little crazy at times. Nice.
love is romantic, but may not always be authentic! true that Ji :-) very true. HVD to you lady!
That poem runs along delightfully, Jingle!
Love is certainly unpredictable.
Viva the unpredictability!
Your words inspire, Jingle.
Thanks for commenting on my duck-poetry-love!
http://juliejordanscott.typepad.com/jjspoetry/2011/02/duck-love-for-valentines-day.html
Love makes the world go around,
If we keep our feet on the ground,
If we let our love fly away,
We'll be empty for many days,
If we let our love overflow,
We won't waste time feeling low,
For you, Jingle, I want to say, May you be blessed this Valentine's Day!
Loved it jingle . You are so right Conditions do lead to contradictions, if u love me then i will love u ha ha.yet love is all the heart desires. Happy V day to u.
Very well said on all aspects of love.... Happy Valentine's Day with love and joy to you....
So true! But it's all worth it in the end, I think
Unpredictable is right!
... but who wants to live without love, even though it can be difficult. ;)
Very nice! Thanks for sharing :)
Fabulous Valentine's Day Potluck Poem ... Love makes the world go round...and sometimes upside down! LOL!
This is very fine, Ji.
Have a great day ...
All simple truths about love. Like the slant rhymes, too! :) Happy <3 Day!
Beautiful poem of love!
That one line "it may not be authentic" - utterly brilliant
hard truths about love...
wonderfully written :)
WOW, great reading, i just love your thoughts, thanks for posting.
in Love, it always has balance and from this balance growth will always be of that...as this is growth one then Ascends higher in their own Consciousness.....great poem Jingle...Happy Thursday to you as well(+)
soulbro*;)xoxoxo---{--@
A very dear and true poem. Good work here, JI.
very very lovely jingle. you said almost every thing about love.
Yes, it makes us feel as if we are running high on dopamine!
Wonderfully written!
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