On this 17th day of July,
I decide to give myself wings to fly:
I will be visiting Mars
and collecting fireflies with a million jars;
I will be landing on the Moon
and eat my dinner without a spoon;
I will be knocking at the door of the Sun
and offer him a bottle of homemade wine;
I will be playing hide and seek with stars
and land on earth with no scars…
I will listen to the whispers of summer wind
while I begin to read your poetry, beautiful and grand.
Monday Poetry Potluck W44, Share 1 to 3 poems with Jingle Poetry Potluck, enjoy poetic friends, You are invited!,
42 comments:
Sounds absolutely ideal. May I join you? :-)
Beautiful:) i just loved this!
I would love to be playing hide and seek with the stars about now...
You usually never fail to make me smile!
Jingle Belle...
Thanks for your wonderful support
I love the rhyme, it matches the cheery feel of the poem!
Beautiful! I loved all of the imagery in your poem. laurie
That sounds like a great time. I'm sipping some wine. :)
Sounds like a lovely trip.
What a lovely, welcoming poem..perfect!!
What a beautiful journey... and I am glad that you have got your wings...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/07/whispers-memories-to-live-by.html
Eating dinner without a spoon sounds like a perfect summer meal!
Blessings. Joanne
I remember when I was five and i thought i could fly
thanks
Sounds like a fabulous trip :)
What a glorious trip! Looks like you'll have plenty of travel companions too. ;-)
What a wonderful journey. Is there room for a little one? Loved it!
Have a good flight!
Wonderful and childlike journey. What fun!
beautifully written.
Wonderful. A fun way to kick things off! Nice one, Jingle!
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this was simply a lovely prose to begin Potluck on!
:) This was a lovely trip, Jingle! Thanks for taking all of us with you!
incredibly inspiring and very creative
Well, what fun, Ji. I'd like to fly with you and "play hide and seek with stars." Would certainly make for a fine Monday evening.
I will read your poem again instead.
Happy Potluck and Happy days ...
lightheartded. lovely!
this is blissful poem..."catching fire flies"
Sounds wonderful! Gorgeous poem =)
Smiles all the way, this one - soft, gentle smiles.
A bottle of your home-made wine sounds fine!
Rosie
Such an assertive positive and great poem ...loved it so much...
This poem is so cute and fun. Nice to visit you always.
Dear Jingle Thank you for visiting my poetry blog and appreciating the poems.Im deeply grateful for the invitation, actually I was out of town and the power cuts have badly affected our work.I will definitely write something for your Blog soon. Best regards.Your poems along with the images are superb, beautifully done.Its a pleasure to be able to see and read them.
I want to collect fireflies!
this is the kind of poetry i definitely need soft and light hearted no tragedy just a beautiful tale.
That was breath taking!
Very well done, enjoyed the read, nice mixture of the imagery you paint with the fantastic pictures
I love your whimsy! Lovely rhymes make for a fantastic journey!
Beautiful.
iLike iLike! :) Beautiful poem! Thanks for sharing!
So much power in this. Beautiful and poetic. http://ogungbesan20.wordpress.com/
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