The evil is practicing violence
in the dark,
Trees suffer,
with broken arms left in the park.
.
Not amused
to see nature being abused,
The angel offers her peace talk
while the humming bird does its ground work.
.
It seems such an important matter,
Even the clouds tilt to listen,
Raindrops fell on her eyelashes,
and made them glisten.
*****
40 comments:
An important matter indeed. It is a privilege to listen in to your poetry.
very well said...
good one!
JJRod'z
I especially like "trees suffer with broken arms left in the park"...wonderul...
Angels are not to be trifled with. I love the title line very much!
I enjoy this - the first line speaks so beautifully to it all.
Oh my ... this is exceptionally beautiful.
Beautiful poem...I like this concept: "The angel offers her peace talk." In the midst of darkness, it is nice to know there are angels watching us. Nicely written.
hmm this made me think how most bad things happen in the dark :(
happy gooseberry day!!
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Beautiful write. Very enjoyable read!
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Beautiful imagery !!
Nice read..
i enjoy the look at nature from original eyes very, very much. this was fun to read a few times.
I simply adore the intensity of feeling with which you've written this piece. It's absolutely beautiful. xoXox
Angels are tough cookies when they need to be! Great poem!
nice...love thefanciful nature of this...i imagineif angels sang i would bend my ear as well...nice
This is one of my favorites!
How very lovely this is Cello String. Beautiful words indeed. Hugs Grå Sky
wow! amazing!! so rich :)
a very unusual concept
Though you speak of an abuse on nature/by nature... 'trees suffer with broken arms left in the park',
there is a tenderness, the touch of an angel.
Beautiful write.
nice one!
Your poetry always makes me think!
oh i like this.
short and sweet and to the point.
thanks for stopping by =)
between
slow sips of wet rain.
So fresh and original, both in thought and form, a strong, fine poem.
Beautiful! So nice to read uplifting, postive thoughts. Thank you!
important ideas good to remember today..!
Very intriguing interpretation of this prompt.
Well done!
this is so beautiful and lyrical. I am reALLY GLAD I read your poem... i loved it a lot. oh to write so beautifully and with meaning. :] xx
Beautiful indeed, love the title !
Original and moving response to the prompt.
We all listen, luckily our broken parts don't show quite as easily.
Lovely poem with a good take on the visual prompt.
A moving talk indeed!
Beautiful imagery, especially the trees with "broken arms."
"The angel offers her peace talk
while the humming bird does its ground work."
This is an insightful comparison!
I really like this one, especially the hummingbird as emissary in the peace talks, thank you.
Super poem on the prompt. I really enjoyed it.
...your poems captivate me! The pictures you choose are so very fitting! You have a new fan... This poem was excellent!
Dramatic, this was a good read
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