A handful stars fall
On the Berlin
Rocks fly to the sky.
.
Falling into Fall
Season all of a sudden,
I fly to Heaven.
.
All of a sudden,
Fall falls with its arms open,
What festive event.
.
Losing her mother,
She boards on a train, letting
wheels ground her sorrows.
.
Poets Rally for fun,
Talents stand out and shine,
Divine treasure hunt.
~~~~~
25 comments:
Very lovely haiku set.. like the Fall season event.. and letting the wheels ground her sorrow ~
Happy day ~
Can't decide which one is my fave. I had so much fun reading all. I love the one about fall, and the Berlin Wall invokes a favorite song to play on the piano -- "see the fire in the sky, we feel the beating of our hearts together..." A powerful haiku. Thanks for dropping by my nook. I appreciate it.
I enjoyed all of them..nice
Beautiful set of Haiku's each excelling the other.
anything about the berlin wall makes me go into a tizzy. :)
"letting
wheels ground her sorrows."
perfect!
Liked the wheels grinding sorrows one!! Nice haiku and lovely thoughts!! But do i see a rhyme pattern here :) Who cares you are passionate about writing and poems and you have thought well!! :)
Great haiku set!
Graceful rendering of haiku. Love them all!
Hank
I read it as Wheels grinding and not grounding......but both works here I guess. Nice work!
I like the third one best!
Interesting set!
Very good.
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Very well written. Amazing talent:)
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Hello.
Everything you pen has a sweetness to it.
All a pleasure to read.
Thanks for sharing & for the visit too.
Your Song Of Love
Sometimes haiku is dry for me, but yours are rich. Enjoyable! Loved the idea of a grouping.
A very lovely sequence. This is a wonderful time of year.
Like the loss and train motif, its a well written haiku with strong emotional impact
Love this. Nicely done!
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All is lovely. But, I personally love the first one. The flow is just beautiful!
Happy rally. :)
...and we have just fallen into fall...
Lovely set of hajjis!
lovely set of haikus, a difficult style to write in but heres -great artistic work.
Wow!
Amazing poetry from the past.
Lovely, my favorite was the haiku with the train, thank you.
Fantastic assortment!
Well doen .. very nice read. I nice way of expressing sorrow.
Namaste,
Iaadora
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