Submitted to : Short Story Slam Week 10: Children's Literature
The day is young,
The air is fresh with a rainbow in the sky,
Duck is alone,
and he decides to learn how to fly.
He has wings,
and feathers, the way birds do,
“I’m ready to change things.”
Duck decides to have his dream come true.
But, no matter how hard he tries,
He couldn’t lift himself up to the air.
Thus, frustrations gives him blue,
and he begins to envy anything that ends with flies,
dragonflies, fireflies, butterflies, …name a few...
“Life is unfair.”
Duck thinks, frowning at everything, old or new.
“Cheer up!”
The cow moos, loudly;
“What’s up?”
The butterfly speaks, timidly;
Bothered by the curious squirrel,
Duck decides not to start a quarrel,
Feeling like screaming,
He takes off his clothes,
and jumps into the pond next to where he is standing,
Duck is swimming,
With his animal friends remain close,
All smiling…
The water is cold,
Yet it feels perfect for him,
“Life is gold!”
Duck tells himself, breathing a sigh of relief.
20 comments:
Fun and charming. How often we take for granted the blessing we have while feeling envious of others. Thanks for this reminder and for your
visit to me. Hugs, pat
Awesome! Metaphoric and fun to read! :) Thanks for sharing!
Very entertaining! Nice one!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/14/what-about-the-cow-2/
Too Cute! Well done. Blessings, Terrii
Fun, and excellent to read, thanks for sharing.
Yvonne.
This is really cute!
Very well said. Improvise and be happy. The duck just did!
Hank
Charming.
:) Lovely, I enjoyed reading this.
Beautiful! I could see this being published and illustrated. Kids would love it.
This is cute , fresh and perfect for little kiddies ...
A splendid story! You captured the essence of childhood beautifully here!
lovely. swimming with glee on how special we all are :)
Ah, what seems to be a betrayal opens the way to a gift.
Love this.
Completely charming ... and I do love ducks and Daffy! ... Happy Sunday evening, Monday! :-)
Okay, this comment is from Gooseberry Garden visit and you already know what I think of this - I enjoyed it as much the second visit! Blessings, Terri
Frustration turned to joy! I love it. :)
charming, enjoyable and very cute. loved it :)
very charming and enjoyable
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/19/my-world/#comment-925
Aw, very nice :-)
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