Thursday, February 2, 2012

A Box of Mysteries (A 55 Words Story to Be Published By Bluebell Books)



You know ___ is coming,
Your eyes glow,
Your mind does a brief ghost mapping,
You don’t have any ___,
Your followers become restless,
Shuffling like adolescents in a dancing party,
It glitters like ___,
What is it?
Spaceseathrill?
Is it sunflowers fresh like morning dew?
Or sunshine in spring rain
that offers hope to almost everything?

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If you write 55 words stories, wish to have one of your talents published via Bluebell Books, please feel free to submit to their collection (see the link above), along with your name, blog link, and content copy and pasted in the comment section, have fun, bless all!

Image Credit: Google.com

20 comments:

Taylor Boomer said...

breath taking to me,

way to go,

you rock.

:)

kellie said...

nice pen, love the mystery ♥ You may enjoy my Free Write Friday prompt going up tonight. It's a mystery box as well ;)

my latest
http://magicinthebackyard.wordpress.com/wp-admin/post.php?post=5128&action=edit

nana_ang_poppaphil said...

Well done..love it>

Have a great weekend.

Tifiny said...

a fun 55.
well done.

Myrna R. said...

I like the fairy tale feel of this. It was delightful to read.

Indie said...

Well done.

Divine!

Ruchi Jain said...

a unique one..

meiro said...

enjoyed read this oiece;
Lovely penned.

Grace said...

I can smell it coming soon ~

booguloo said...

55 is alive.

S.E. Ingraham said...

unique and taking of breath ...

August said...

simply fantastic,

you make us wonder.
;)

belladonna23 said...

love love loved this, very unique.. the spaces let the reader design the story

Die Reise meines Leben said...

The anticipation to look forward to the surprise builds up. Great illustrative work!

Short poems said...

Nicely penned!

Short poems said...

Such a poignant piece!

zongrik said...

very eclectic.

elephant slave

rch said...

The words go so well with the pic, they have a futuristic sci-fi feel to them, really good, congrats.

Bijaylaxmi said...

Love it......:)

Elizena said...

Very well done. Mysterious and attention grabbing at the same time. I loved it. Be blessed.

http://elizena-lovingmycreator.blogspot.com/2012/02/soul-song.html