Friday, April 23, 2010

I Have Lost My Common Sense

I have lost my common sense,
I don't know what's in your mind,
The uneasiness appears so tense,
I feel the urge to unwind.
You have captured my heart inchly,
i dreamed about being with you,
body and soul,
I remind myself not to give up easily,
I plant something new
So that life is to grow.
At times genuine passion
do the cost,
Facts mingle with fiction,
I find my senses lost.

17 comments:

Anya said...

Wow!!

Jingle
so funny lines :))))
Thanks for the smile ^___^

Enjoy your weekend
:)
:)

Brian Miller said...

nice one ji!

Wordwand said...

well done jingle, and a smart blog .happy to discover it.

william said...

ah at long last wow, lol, cool blog ji, have saved it so I know when u post, cool poem xxx u are the best , keep smilin xx

Sherry said...

Hi Jingle - I got your message on my blog about the poetry invite. I've been really busy the last few days, but I will take a look soon! Thanks!

DuDo said...

A commendable post u got there Ji."I guess even i lost my senses" :)

Jen said...

I can relate to this one. It doesn't matter how old we get, we lose our heads and our common sense when we develop a crush...

King of New York Hacks said...

great post , great blog...inspires me to maybe post some of the poetry I've written myself...we'll see..

Cloudia said...

Growing!




Aloha from Waikiki


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sheri... said...

hey jingle, really nice to see you on blogspot! you are so generous with your comments...thanks so much for always being such an encouragement!

Sh@KiR@ CK said...

Very cool writing, Jingle!
Glad to see some of your works here.
hugs
shakira

Mr. Stupid said...

Hi Jingle. That was great. I am new here and glad I found your blog. I am your newest follower.
Have a good day...:)

The Lucy and Dick Show said...

Very cute and so true!

Readers Dais said...

a confused and burning mind do lose its sense,
the poem makes real sense...

♥ Kathy said...

That was cool :) Are you staying on Blogger now or doing both blogs?

Dreamhaven said...

I enjoyed this very much. Thanks for visiting my blog

e.a.s. demers said...

Well done! I liked this one very much :-)