Wednesday, May 19, 2010

Kiss You Without Control




When troubles bring you down,
You may not know what to do.
Please look inside your heart,
And you shall know I love you.
You are in each thought I have,
And every breath I take.
You dominate my soul,
With every move I make.
I recall us the way we used to be,
Your smile is so remarkable to me.
What we have shared feels so right,
To say I love you, every single night.
Don’t you know that you make my days count,
I am the happiest when you are around?
It doesn’t matter what others say,
as long as I love you, day by day.
Hold you deep within my soul,
Kiss you without control.
Take me to another dimension
so that I sense the heat of your passion.
On the wings of a rocket,
My love 4 u flies.
Soaring all the way high in the sky,
tears well up in my eyes.
...
I love you,
This is true!

30 comments:

Sam Liu said...

Beautiful, Jingle, you have so magically captured the essence of love, I love this poem.

Gandhali said...

whoa.. that is good.. real good.. it reminds me of that song "when i am down, and oh my soul so weary" i know it doesn't really relate here, but yeah

Thom said...

So much passion :) Very well done my friend :)

Nes said...

Aww Jingle how sweet...I love this poem!

theprimate said...

simple, sincere, honest and pure

Brian Miller said...

there is a lot of passion packed in this one ji

sheri... said...

jingle, this is lovely! so full of undying love and devotion...surely this is a reflection of who you are? this kind of loyalty is so rare to find anymore...

sarah said...

beautiful...your heart really comes through...have a great day...full of love coming back to you....

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

really beautifull
sweet and simple :))
loved it :))

Mr. Stupid said...

Beautiful poem, Jingle. Lots of love in those words...:)

Katherine said...

Hi Jingle .. yours & my mind are in similar places tonight! I also wrote about my love tonight...What a beautiful poem!

ChrisAu said...

nice !!!

ModernMom said...

Beautiful!!
Have a happy Thursday!

JStar said...

So sensual and passionate Ji...Isnt love just so beautiful and enchanting!

Bachelor said...

very nice poem indeed and a rose taboot! :) The Bach

Janice said...

Passionately wonderful, Jingle. Every day can be valentine's day.

Cielo Azul Jewelry said...

BRAVO!

xoxo,
Carol

buffalodick said...

By Judy Collins,from the song Clouds..."It's Love's illusions I recall, I really don't know Love at all"...

Kimberly said...

I love the warmth that the words emit. What a lovely job you have done.

island of peace said...

loved it. its full of love and warmth. :)

william said...

there are NEVER any troubles when JINGLE is around, sweet poem gifted lady xxx

Ronda Laveen said...

So, who is Mr. Wonderful? Lovely poem.

croleyc69 said...

So very beautiful !!!! I love it ! :)
Caroline

steveroni said...

OMG! ...and you wrote this? I bow to you. those kinds of words must stir lovely emotions in even the coldest of long-frozen hearts. They did mine...Hmmmmmmm!

Crystal Mary said...

Well done, beautifully thought out and written.
It makes me feel sad for all the lonely people in the world who have no-one to care about or care for them...
Love is a wonderous experience..
Lets pass it along. Hugs to you.

gayle said...

I wish someone wrote this for me!! Awesome!!

Katie's Dailies said...

Beautiful words simply put.

Caty said...

whoever is on the opposite end of that love you are giving is a lucky person! great poem :) brightened my day!

Tracy said...

This a very sweet, romantic poem, Jingle.

Jingle said...

Ronda:

fiction writers write many fictions, their work reflect multi-layers of life, Happy Potter has little to do with its author J. K. Rowing.

I rarely try such type of love poem, but I am a married woman, I know what it feels like when one is in love and more...