Sunday, May 9, 2010

Sunday 160-When You Are Away

When you are away,
The day feels heavy.
No mood to get in the game
and play.
everything looks gray
On a gray day,
Do you sense my aching heart
When we are apart?

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What can you say in 160 characters? (spaces included)

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Happy Sunday!

28 comments:

Prayer Girl said...

Hey - you're breaking my heart here!!

Ah, but now we are together again and my heart is singing. :)

PG

Thom said...

Absence makes the heart grow fonder so they say. Well written. :)

Sh@KiR@ CK said...

WOW.. such a moving 160!
Jingle, this is really romantic!
Bravo!
You are ok?
hugs
shakira

DrSoosie said...

Love this poem. It happens to be gray where I am but I am choosing to ignore this since my loved ones are around me. Happy Mother's day!!!

Susie

♥ Chocolate Lover ♥ said...

:)))

hey jingle :D
you won an award :D

Monkey Man said...

A great 160, Jingle. Thanks for playing. Have a solid Sunday.

sheri... said...

aw, jingle, this is so sweet! who in their right mind wouldn't love to hear you say this to them?? happy day!

Amy said...

What an amazing post..

Happy Mother's Day..

william said...

another winner, but then u always are xxx see u tomorrow evenin my time, have a great Monday xxx

Brian Miller said...

hope the time passes quickly until your love is home once again. nice 160. happy mothers day!

Katherine said...

I lovely 160 Jingle! I have felt this heavy heart myself! HUGS to you!

Tracie said...

It's been a looooong time since I've felt that way about anyone. *sigh*

Hope you had a great weekend!

gayle said...

It's terrible when you are missing someone!!

Subby said...

Nice! Hits a bit close to home for me at times, tho' :(

Gandhali said...

awwww that's so cute...

Ronda Laveen said...

Awww, great 160. Wishing you sunny skies...always.

Dayle Allen Shockley said...

Very nice.

Realliveman said...

Very nice 160!

Lorraine said...

Lovely rhythm Jingle, plus I love that little drawing :)

natalee said...

NICE!!!! so sad and touching

Paul C said...

You capture the feeling of temporary separation well.

T.J. said...

The way I felt every time my now husband and I had to part ways at the end of each weekend and head back to our respective colleges.

Your words captured it so well!!!

Hope your weekend was wonderful!!!

Kelly said...

That's so very sweet, I've enjoyed reading your blog!

Dom* said...

Jingle....very moving 160 as it puts a spin of a 180 to shame..very good poem as well..enjoy always(+)
soulbro*:)....HAPPY MONDAY to you also...

Cielo Azul Jewelry said...

Hello, thanks for your lovely comment=0)

It's so hard to say goodbye. Especially when it will be too long until the next visit.

Have a great week!
xoxo,
Carol

island of peace said...

very cute and touching :)

Alexis AKA MOM said...

Oh sweetie! You're amazing.

e.a.s. demers said...

This is wonderful.... so much said in so few words :-)