Sunday, January 23, 2011
All Rules Vanish But One (4 Jingle Poetry Potluck Week 19)
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Grab me some grapes,
plus slices of apple pies,
Beckon forth a pack of ties
with stars twinkling in your eyes.
.
The light sneaks in
and paint gold on the cello string,
all RULES vanish but one,
Music vibrating in honor of the sun.
.
The scripting of love
embraces you like a soft leather glove.
Minds go through
and leave magic in YOU!
.
I tremble
and feel humble:
The hope to live shall never die,
Count the blessings between You and I!
*****
This is an entry for Jingle Poetry Potluck Week 19
Theme: Laws, Signs, and Regulations!
When it comes to poetry, there is NO laws or rules for me..I write how I feel…
Please join us by writing your entry today, post it, and link in starting 8pm, American Central!
Poetry Potluck Week 19 , Everyone Is Welcome
Your Blog Is Freaking Fabulous Award
The Star Poet Award from Jingle
Your Poetry Jingles Award (Image credit; Adam and Trisha)
Friends Are Special Award from Jingle
You Are Invincible Award From Jingle
PS: Jingle offers her most sincere gratitude to those who support VICTIMS in any natural disasters, and wishing our blogging friends in Australia good luck in surviving the plight of floods..God Bless You!
The above awards are 4 all of the friends in blogging sphere who are reading this post, following Jingle's blogs, or supporting Jingle's communities and efforts via Thursday Poets Rally and Jingle Poetry Community...
Due to the large number of you out there, I may not be able to reach all of you via commenting! But if you wish to claim the awards, please leave a comment under this post and I will get back to you within 2 or 3 days...Your Friendship Is Precious to Me, Your Love or Support to Jingle, or Her Communities are Invaluable!
Happy Sunday!
Send You Love and Blessings!
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Great words Ji..
Someone is Special
Love and friendship rules!
Beautiful words.
Ji, as always, your spirit of friendship and love shines through in your poems and in your actions. Kudos! Well done ...
Congratulations on Potluck #19. Wonderful! That is quite an accomplishment and the number of participants grows each week.
I like your take on the theme, almost fantasy fairytale in natures :O)
All rules vanish but one. Nice. And happily mine fits right in.
http://wantofwords.blogspot.com/
I absolutely love your line, "The scripting of love
embraces you like a soft leather glove."
It's just wonderful!
you are a source of love & blessings, Jingle
Aloha from Honolulu
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Hi, Jingle: Oh, it really cheered me up to see you left a note at my place re: the friendship award! Thank you, D
I too loved these lines:
The scripting of love
embraces you like a soft leather glove.
What a wonderful image. You can almost feel it.
Great words Jingle! I too liked your take on the theme. I should've read yours before I tried to do mine!
"The scripting of love
embraces you like a soft leather glove."
excellent.
happy potluck #19 -wow!
Expressions of love, expressions of life, ah!!! beautiful, happy Potluck!http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/
Lovely writing with a deft touch
This was lovely, Jingle.
Oh that was delightful to read!
Thank you for your comment on my blog
You are a dear Ji
You are a dear Ji
All the rules vanish but one....love and blessings to all. Beautiful words, Ji. Thanks.
More blessings to you as grow your circle of friends! :)
Beautiful & Thanx for stopping by my blog !!
"The light sneaks in
and paints gold on the cello string"
Wonderful image! It resonates....
loved the words, the flow and the softness of it...
freedom!!
love the words jingle...beautiful
Love the idea of music vibrating in honour of the sun! Beautiful! I wish we could see a little more of summer's sun in Australia! Though here in Victoria, we are nowhere near the horrendous plight of Queensland! (Although some communities in the north of Victoria may argue that idea! They have been flood bound too!)
Always loved your work...
lovely..
Hi Jingle-
"The hope to live shall never die"...Well, isn't that brilliant!!!
One, two, three I slowly count. I could never count them all. Thanks
Nice, especially the second paragraph.
All rules vanish but one. I just love it. Love. Love. Love : )
Thanks for the award, I chose the yellow shoe, what girl doesn't love shoes. Thanks again.
Have a great day.. What a great poem and awards..
Sincere thanks for everything - not just the awards.
Fabulous words!
Count the blessing between you and I...Musically written, really is food for the soul.
beautiful words Jingle...
and lovely awards :)
Thanks for the awards and the words of enouragement and friendship!
the light painting gold on the cello string..lovely
A lovely write...heart warming.
Beautiful poem as always Jingle!! Have a super fantastic week!!!! :)
feels so warm... as always i wish you love <3
Hi Jingle, your poem is freakin fabulous...:)
It inspires me so much...:)
I am back for the Monday Poetry Potluck, but am I late?
I hope not, finally I am No. 129th to link my entry there...:)
Good morning from the Philippines!
Love,
Amity
Here is my entry for Monday Poetry Potluck:
http://intelclub.blogspot.com/2011/01/his-downfall.html
such happy words! :)
Thanks for the awards to us all!
XOXO Lola:)
oh! but quiver!
You put me to shame. I thought I couldn't tackle this week's prompt - and then you come up with a masterpiece like this!
(There's a link for you on my last comments page.)
Beautiful Jingle... :)
simply adorable. beautiful spirit.
trisha
mydomainpvt.wordpress.com
Thank you Jingle!!! Beautiful poem (as always)! Have a great day, xo
Clever in the way that is distinctly you. Thanks ... and thanks for the awards.
Beautiful... you are one amazing soul .. God bless!
Stooping by to say thanks for your kind words of support on My Heart Is Heavy
Another beautiful poem by my beautiful friend Jingle. :)
"all RULES vanish but one,
Music vibrating in honor of the sun."
Beautiful, and so true! Wonderful!
.
music has rules, but not restrictive ones :-) I feel the same as you, about writing. Nice piece :-)
I think this was wonderfully said. Its clear through your writing, your love for words.
aww... this is so sweet and romantic, Jingle... sometimes, I too feel that love in music, and music in love are the only rules of life! Cuz they RULE!!!! :)
I love this piece my fav lines are
"The scripting of love
embraces you like a soft leather glove." just beautiful!!! love the entire post!!!
I love how this poem talks about all things good and cheerful! :) It makes me feel that things are right with the world.
That was pretty, Jingle, and thank you!
I liked the connections you made in this. :) Indeed, hope springs eternal!
Beautifully written and rules casted away.. :)
Hey dear, miss you guys.. Yeah, was away for kind of long due to my injured foot and also my grandpa's neurosurgery..
Just saw your comment on my latest post..
I will be returning soon to Jingle Poetry.. and really miss you and the rest..
:)
S.Pike
Move us with harmony this is the quest
Traveling about with this and leaving the rest
Yes we see the magic in you as well
We know you are happy and we can tell
No wrong has ever come out of this
Even it has been awhile we did not miss
Good poem my Dearest Jingle...enjoy Love and happy Friday to you(+)
soulbro* ;) xoxoxo--{--@
This is such a sweet poem. :)
Wonderful.
Count the blessings and you are certainly one. Thank you ...
And thank you for the thoughtful awards ... Another post that is good even the second time around.
Well done, Ji ...
Nice poem. Really liked it.
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