Bare feet,
Hop around, quick.
.
Room to room,
Their hands move like a broom,
Their eyes scan
everything like a machine.
.
Agile as a bird,
They fly in the house, back and forth,
Everything moves and improves, not a word,
All done, sigh, no more chores.
My Entry 4 Alphabe-Thursday: W is 4 Wendy...
Alphabe-Thursday:W is 4 Wendy…
Have Fun Today, love you all!
44 comments:
Loved it Jingle! the final line made me smile...
A tribute to housewives ?
very nice...I like it! thanks for dropping by my blog...glad to be here!
housewives do deserve some attention.
agree?
Hey...if I looked as cute as the cartoon girls you shared with your housecleaning poem! :o)
Blessings & Aloha!
Thank you for stopping by my V post. It looks like you are all set for the next Alphabe-Thursday "W" post! I'm not sure if I will make it for this week's W post ...oh well..
can you send them over please !
Most enjoyable Jingle. loved the read.
Yvonne.
I wish Wendy would come and visit me!! I'd love my housework to be so quickly and silently accomplished!
Great fun. I enjoyed that. The penultimate line was the one that grabbed me: a certain ambiguity gives in depth.
sounds like heaven!
sign me up please : )
Thanks for the comments, kind folks,
Doing chores could be boring,
well, have a laugh, especially those who take charge in household chores...
Reminds me - I must get around to cleaning this house. Cute poem.
Great poem! :o)
What a cute "W" day feature. I really enjoyed your visit. I am trying to get motivated to start my spring cleaning. It is not easy.
Enjoyed Jingle...
I would like to nominate you for the versatile poet award..You can claim the award by going to http://poem-myworldofexcitement.blogspot.com/2011/03/versatile-blogger-award.html..
With Regards,
Rashmi
great poem ji. very well crafted.
Hi Jingle, just stopped by to thank for your comments and visit ! ! AND...as a housewife I say....absolutely, we deserve some credit and/or attention...lol....See ya again soon..Mary
Your poem is nice but oh, how I dislike housework!! :-)
Thanks for your comment recently!
You have a talent I can only pray for. Enjoyed my visit.
Thanks for the nice comment on my "Vittles" post.
Can you send them to my house next?! I've got plenty of chores to be done. :)
Hi again Jingle!
Great ‘W’ post. Happy Alphabe-Thursday!
XOXO LOLA:)
Btw Alphabe-Thursday
sigh...
My chores are not done since I'm visiting you all this afternoon....
Anybody want to come help?
And yet another sweet poem!!!
I wish they could come to MY house!!
xo
I need to be doing some housework myself-maybe that will get me moving!
You made cleaning sound fun!
talented in writing .well-done
Nice little jingle, Jingle!
Love it!
You're so good with words :)
Oh Jingle, this is just tooo cute--I love it! And I love the graphics too...so perfect!!!
XO
very well expressed, Jingle. I visited your blog for the first time but I am sure I will be a regular visitor. Check out my recent post @ http://blog.memetales.com/2011/03/st-patricks-day-craft-and-book/
Very cute! Funny how similar yet how different our post are! hehehe
Happy Green Day =0)
On My List today!!
Awesome! I wish I could clean my house with ease like these ladies..
Are Wendy's rates reasonable?
Send them to my house. There's plenty to do here.
good fun. enjoyed it.
superb!!! :)
housecleaning is needed by all,
wow...
Thanks for the funny responses..
Happy Friday.
My house next, please?? Great rhyme! and love the little puppy prints surrounding your blog.
Can they come to my house next?
I guess I'm pretty late on the list of requests for a personal visit...sigh...
This was such a cute and different poem. Loved the perkiness of it...something I definitely DO NOT feel when I'm cleaning house.
Thanks for a great link.
A+
I really enjoyed that. Thanks!
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