Tuesday, March 15, 2011

W Word Challenge-Wendy, Sandy, and Matty Housecleaning



Bare feet,
Hop around, quick.
.
Room to room,
Their hands move like a broom,
Their eyes scan
everything like a machine.
.
Agile as a bird,
They fly in the house, back and forth,
Everything moves and improves, not a word,
All done, sigh, no more chores.




My Entry 4 Alphabe-Thursday: W is 4 Wendy...
Alphabe-Thursday:W is 4 Wendy…
Have Fun Today, love you all!

44 comments:

Umamaheswari.A said...

Loved it Jingle! the final line made me smile...

ChrisAu said...

A tribute to housewives ?

Dhemz said...

very nice...I like it! thanks for dropping by my blog...glad to be here!

Jingle Poetry said...
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Jingle said...

housewives do deserve some attention.
agree?

Personalized Sketches and Sentiments said...

Hey...if I looked as cute as the cartoon girls you shared with your housecleaning poem! :o)

Blessings & Aloha!
Thank you for stopping by my V post. It looks like you are all set for the next Alphabe-Thursday "W" post! I'm not sure if I will make it for this week's W post ...oh well..

Selina Kingston said...

can you send them over please !

welcome to my world of poetry said...

Most enjoyable Jingle. loved the read.


Yvonne.

Jay at The Depp Effect said...

I wish Wendy would come and visit me!! I'd love my housework to be so quickly and silently accomplished!

Dave King said...

Great fun. I enjoyed that. The penultimate line was the one that grabbed me: a certain ambiguity gives in depth.

mle said...

sounds like heaven!
sign me up please : )

Jingle said...

Thanks for the comments, kind folks,
Doing chores could be boring,

well, have a laugh, especially those who take charge in household chores...

Myrna R. said...

Reminds me - I must get around to cleaning this house. Cute poem.

Deborah said...

Great poem! :o)

LV said...

What a cute "W" day feature. I really enjoyed your visit. I am trying to get motivated to start my spring cleaning. It is not easy.

Rashmi said...

Enjoyed Jingle...
I would like to nominate you for the versatile poet award..You can claim the award by going to http://poem-myworldofexcitement.blogspot.com/2011/03/versatile-blogger-award.html..
With Regards,
Rashmi

trisha said...

great poem ji. very well crafted.

Mary said...

Hi Jingle, just stopped by to thank for your comments and visit ! ! AND...as a housewife I say....absolutely, we deserve some credit and/or attention...lol....See ya again soon..Mary

Pagan Sphinx said...

Your poem is nice but oh, how I dislike housework!! :-)

Thanks for your comment recently!

Rita said...

You have a talent I can only pray for. Enjoyed my visit.

Thanks for the nice comment on my "Vittles" post.

Rachel Hoyt said...

Can you send them to my house next?! I've got plenty of chores to be done. :)

Lola said...

Hi again Jingle!

Great ‘W’ post. Happy Alphabe-Thursday!

XOXO LOLA:)

Btw Alphabe-Thursday

Rocky Mountain Woman said...

sigh...

My chores are not done since I'm visiting you all this afternoon....

Anybody want to come help?

Judie said...

And yet another sweet poem!!!

Jannie Funster said...

I wish they could come to MY house!!

xo

Rebecca said...

I need to be doing some housework myself-maybe that will get me moving!

JDaniel4's Mom said...

You made cleaning sound fun!

Manny Minds' love stories said...

talented in writing .well-done

Judy Sheldon-Walker said...

Nice little jingle, Jingle!

lina@happy family said...

Love it!
You're so good with words :)

Cindy Adkins said...

Oh Jingle, this is just tooo cute--I love it! And I love the graphics too...so perfect!!!
XO

Rashi said...

very well expressed, Jingle. I visited your blog for the first time but I am sure I will be a regular visitor. Check out my recent post @ http://blog.memetales.com/2011/03/st-patricks-day-craft-and-book/

Wanda Metcalf said...

Very cute! Funny how similar yet how different our post are! hehehe

Happy Green Day =0)

Theresa said...

On My List today!!

☆☆Mumsy said...

Awesome! I wish I could clean my house with ease like these ladies..

La said...

Are Wendy's rates reasonable?

Lourie said...

Send them to my house. There's plenty to do here.

Celestial Dreamz said...

good fun. enjoyed it.

Harshika said...

superb!!! :)

Jingle said...

housecleaning is needed by all,
wow...

Thanks for the funny responses..

Happy Friday.

taylorsoutback said...

My house next, please?? Great rhyme! and love the little puppy prints surrounding your blog.

House Revivals said...

Can they come to my house next?

Jenny said...

I guess I'm pretty late on the list of requests for a personal visit...sigh...

This was such a cute and different poem. Loved the perkiness of it...something I definitely DO NOT feel when I'm cleaning house.

Thanks for a great link.

A+

Madeleine Begun Kane said...

I really enjoyed that. Thanks!