Friday, March 4, 2011

Free Write Friday in 55 Words




Near a lovely bay,
under an old oak tree,
a girl sits down to pray:
One of her best friends got HIV,
Another one turned out gay,
Her family wants her to stay away,
But friendship is perfect,
How can she handle these? you say,
God, lead the way!
Let love brighten up the day.




This is my entry 4 Free Write Friday Free Write Friday, Trees And Flash Friday 55 G-man’s Flash Friday 55

It is all fiction!
Happy Weekend,
Thanks for the Encouragement and Support.

Image credit: google.com

33 comments:

Austin said...

Love - love this! Had this conversation about a week ago - Very well taken & described.

Rockets and Wings is my 55 this week.

Reader Wil said...

No, she is right: you cannot stay away from a sick friend!

Rajlakshmi said...

interesting... life can become very complicating for some.

welcome to my world of poetry said...

Very well written and enjoyable to read Jingle.

Have a great week-end.
Yvonne.

Caroline said...

Another teriffic job !!! Loved it !
Have a great Friday !!

G-Man said...

A friend in need....
Excellent 55 Jingle Belle...
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

Kellie said...

Thanks for contributing to Free Write Friday! Great as always! Hugs Jingle!

Cloudia said...

a-MEN!



Aloha from Waikiki


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Iwrite4u said...

The image is terrific ....the poem touching .Friendship never sees them though..they last ever

hpicasso said...

for non-fiction reasons, I like this a lot...thanks and keep jingling

Peace, hp

thank you for stopping by

Kavita said...

This, I like!
Friendships come without strings attached... and without any criteria...

Well played, Jingle..

Alice Audrey said...

I can understand her parent's concerns where the HIV is concerned, but good for her for sticking by her friends.

Monkey Man said...

Nicely done. Hooray for you.

Jerry said...

LOve doesn't quit.

Hold my hand: a social worker's blog said...

Excellent!

Doris

izzy said...

Thanks this is great! I could identify.

Bandan said...

Nice one!

Diseases and eccentricities never come between true friendship :)

Hope to see more from you :)

In the meantime , I would love if you would have a look at this :

http://bitsbj.blogspot.com/2011/03/wishful-thinking.html

Thanks! :)

william said...

another fab write, u are really good at these xx

Rajesh said...

Simply beautiful.

Rajesh said...

Simply beautiful.

TALON said...

A thoughtful and beautiful 55, Jingle. Love is the key...

gayle said...

I love this!!! Friendship is a wonderful thing!

ds said...

Friendship is love--you make your point beautifully.

Keep on!

JamieDedes said...

Let love brighten the way. Now, THAT's not fiction. :-)

Nice!

Barbara Rosenzweig said...

Well done, lovely photo and message.

Short Poems said...

Lovely write, enjoyed it!

Honey at 2805 said...

Your poem is touching and thought provoking.

Thanks for your comment on my use os "U".

Akelamalu said...

She's a perfect friend. :)

Madeleine Begun Kane said...

That was lovely!

Belinda said...

Love really does brighten the day. I enjoyed reading your 55!

magiceye said...

lovely!

trisha said...

beautiful, touching poem ji. hope she sees her way.

Sarath Unnithan said...

maybe fiction...still very sweet..
:)