Roses?
I will send some,
Tell me you need them,
when they are fresh,
I will send you some.
Money?
Yes, I have some.
I have a huge allowance in CD,
And I earned some while trying to get my Ph. D.
Yes, I have some!
Love?
I have it secured.
Let me live,
Trust my belief,
I have it secured.
Friends?
Yes, I enjoy many.
You come in different shapes and sizes,
I enjoy offering you all kinds of prizes.
Yes, I enjoy many.
Men?
Yes, I adore some,
Especially when they have the style
To keep me interested for a while.
Yes, I adore some.
Pain?
Of course, I get some at times,
I feel nil shame to tell it,
I have zero desires to expel it,
And I do get some at times.
Loses?
I can handle it,
If it is never meant to be mine,
I shall feel just FINE.
Yes, I can handle it.
*****
This poem is for Jingle's Thursday Poets Rally Week 17.
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49 comments:
beautiful and full of confindence...just like you, my friend!
I like this poem and I didn't get confused at all, LOL!!!
Have a lovely Thursday=0)
xoxo,
Carol
nice...a smooth and easy roll...yeah i got some too...but taking it smooth and easy...
I absolutely love this poem!
Truly a fine poem of a great attitude! Love it! :) The Bach
it's like a soliloquey from a play of life-- nicely done!
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Beautiful and I'm hopeful that one day these things will come all our ways :-)Have a lovely thursday!
This is poetry at its perfection....I love the rhyming style, you delivered it professionally, KEEP UP!!!
I'd been to some blogs before the comment I made in the wk 17 pg, I'm still going through some now. I've lost count....
Very nice - "I can handle it"
*wow an outstanding poem jingle.it's fluent and inspiring, it's different from what you 've written.
flowers are beautiful, roses are red, violets are blue, sugar is sweet and Jingle is true xxx
lovely xxx
What a great poem! Hope, determination and confidence all wrapped up in great structure and composition. :3
Very nice , I love this !!!
Caroline
This is my favorite so far. I loved it. take care, enjoy.
Very nice...so wonderfully positive.
Born with two hands to let go
Never to carry anchors as you know
To hold on to these things we cannot possess
It is much relieving for the Soul to have its rest
As the Soul knows the path from before
Just open your eyes and it will open the door
enjoy Jingle(+)
soulbro* Dom:)
Great poem!!
Such a strong, positive message, Jingle. Lemonade?
Very neat. Very creative. Liked it.
PG
Sounds like a conversation I would had before with myself...
Well done , Jingle!
love it!
hugs
shakira
7 "chunks" to your set, really interesting. You should make a paper heptagon and put each part on a side. Roll it/ Read it when you are feeling blue.
-bryan
I really like this one!
Great structure to this poem- I too love the confidence it exudes!!
Great poem! I really enjoyed the contrast between the beginning and end!
Lovely poem, Jingle. A poem of confidence and the beauty of friendship.
What a great poem. The last part sounds like something I have to tell myself often threw each week!
like all your poems, Ji, this poem is so light and fun... very beautiful... :)
Wonderful words!Congratulations!
and thanks so much for your gentle visit in my blog!
happy weekend
Luna
Wow, this is amazing...wow I have to go back and read it again, wonderful piece Jingle!!!!and yes it does strike a chord lol
aww thats a beautiful and sweet write... I too have got lots of love for you :)
A most excellent post,very upbeat
wonderful
i love the cadence
its like being moored at a dock, and rocking back and forth.
This very lovely. I am sorry I didn't comment on it yesterday...I just realized I had only visited your other blog.
fantastic and very beautifully written :)
Welcome, Trisha!
You have a fancy name, if you don't mention, I may not recognize you.
Sweet you.
I too love the confidence this poem exudes Jingle. Not afraid to laugh or cry. Not afraid of life. Nice flow.
really enjoyed that! thanks again for your comments on my blog and for reading. feel free to become a "follower" :) i love having new readers!
Fantastic write...I like the way you infuse all the different theme into one great post.
Great energy in these words. Yes, you can handle it.
Heartspell said...
I especially like the verse about love. Well done
yes. i love that feeling :) "peace" actually i used to share some picture quotes with my friends earlier and update them in this blog. then i started to use it to post comments.
i use it to post comments and follow friends/readers.
I love the sentiment, great poem!
interesting.
god bless...
beautiful.
amazing.
nice mindset.
lovely sentiment.
nice,
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