buzz
Like bumble bees,
But human hearts
Don't beat
The way bees do.
Human thoughts have wings,
Like bees do,
But isn't it true
Bees behave
While humans believe,
get inspired by spring showers,
and use their imaginations to express themselves?
Bees leave their marks on flowers,
Human make history via humanly powers.
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Write a fictional story in 55 words. Give it a try and notify G-man at:
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This entry is also 4 Family Fridays, with Amy and Lori are the co-hosts...
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53 comments:
Always delightful!
its so true... and beautifully put into wordss
People and bees both have honeys, but people have more than one kind.
(Some people also get buzzed!) ;)
You reminded me of this: Bee Haiku
Great 55 - I so enjoyed reading it. Have a great weekend....Hugs
Exellent 55 my friend. Well done.
Wonderful 55 a pleasure to read.
also thanks for the awards.
Have a great week-end.
Yvonne.
Wonderful 55 a pleasure to read.
also thanks for the awards.
Have a great week-end.
Yvonne.
very well written 55, superb xx
This was so much fun to read Jingle!
Happy w-e to you!
So well written, a lovely read.
Have a great weekend
Not sure how you can do this, but congratulations!
Thank you so much for giving me a `Pink Award'. I am not a reward participant but do appreciate the gift.
Love your poetry and look forward to reading lots more.
I really enjoyed this 55, Jingle. Contrasting the bees and humans was inspired!
Jingle a delightful poem!
Pamela
I'm afraid I prefer bees these days :) well said!
What a sweet, delightful and whimsical poem!
What kindness...
This is the best part of the blogging community, lifting each other UP :)
You are so talented!!! n Thanks for the award Jingle...I'll blogroll this site of yours so I can come back often. Mwah xxx
this was so fun, jingle! what a lovely imagination you have :) have a great weekend!!
"Human thoughts have wings." I really like that, Jingle.
Very well written
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Jingle Belle...
This was very creative.
I loved the way it came together.
Excellent 55 My Friend.
Thank you for this beautiful contribution, and please have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
Lovely Jingle! Happy Weekend :)
Thank you very much for these delightful awards! I will have to try my hand at the 55 word fiction challenge, looks interesting.
-Weasel
This has such a nice rhythm to it.
Lovely poem for a summer day. Thanks for offering the awards. You are very kind.
Bee's and human, I have never thought of the comparison, now I will. Human thoughts have wings...they sure do! Bee's behave and humans believe. Beautiful..
Thank you so much for the awards Jingle :) I'm ecstatic ;) Thanks a lot Jingle.. you rock!!
And your poem is fantastic and so true to the last bit!! Interesting write up :)
I love it a lot that human thoughts have wings...
Have a great weekend!
Claudia
nice comparison of bees and humans...
lovely write :)
Interesting, this is the first time i reading a 55 :D Thank for sharing ^^
and also thank for the awards:D i really appreciated them
Thanks for stopping by and joining in.. Sorry I have not been around much. My Mom is still visiting and I had a Family wedding.. Have a great Saturday..
Great job, Jingle!
Excellent 55 Jingle! And, I love your daisy July award!
Looking back to the post with the tomatoes...On Netflix I saw that old Ginger Rogers/Fred Astaire movie (Shall We Dance, 1937) last night where they sang Let's Call the Whole Thing Off for the first time. It was written by George and Ira Gershwin.
Cute awards!
Happy weekend Ji.
Jingle, I wrote this poem with you in mind a bit. I was never as conscious of leaving comments since you came into my life.
http://joycefied.wordpress.com/2010/07/11/post-a-comment/
Very thoughtful verse & a good metaphor with bees! Something to learn from it!
this is so cool and love :Bees behave
While humans believe," Awesome.
This is great! I love the comparisons between the two - so imaginative! Thank you for the inspiration and for your kind comment, Kristin xo
Hi Jingle,
Good job.
I liked this 55 about bees and us... nicely done.Heartspell
THANK YOU SOOOOOOOO MUCH JI!!! :D
i am honored :)
i do have to learn from you ppl how to make these awards looks so beautiful , modify them or whatever it is u do :P
Many thanks, Jingle!
Thankyou. I will continue to write!
Woowww.. that's an amazing thought you've put across, Jingle!! Bees behave, while humans believe -- I really really LOVED that line!! :)
And thank you so very much for the awards, Jingle! I think you are plain crazy TIRELESS and MARVELOUS!! :))
Hope you had a Fabulous weekend!!
What an awesome 55 well-worded, well organized, uniquely delivered WORDS of poetry!
Lovely!
Sunday of bliss ~ to you!
beautifully written!
Thanks a ton for the award Jingle. U r such a sweet heart.
Thanks for the award Jingle
Pamela
Love it, great wording!
Love the awards as always, and congrats on all the followers :)
I've been MIA, with my moving across the Atlantic and quitting my old job, but I'm alive! hehe and grateful for your awards! :)
It'll take a few weeks more, but I'll be fully back soon!
lots of love!
Mel
PS: For you!
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Loved this line:
Bees behave
While humans believe,"
Great 55!
Thanks for sharing!
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