Everything is 'perfect' between the two, until one day, she decides to follow him for once.
And she sees him stop at his ex-girlfriend's house.
She wants revenges.
He's shocked to catch her in the arms of his best friend.
Misconception costs.
She doesn't know that he has gone to bid final goodbye, nothing more.
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Write a fictional story in 55 words. Give it a try and notify G-man at:
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Happy Flash Fiction Friday, Everyone!
Thank You for Reading and Commenting!
25 comments:
A sage 55 indeed, Jingle.
(Heed this warning, people!)
"a fictional story in 55 words".
There. I'm done !
crisp
Revenge is an entrapment for ourselves! It never satisfies!
A wonderful 55 words. most enjoyable to read.
Yvonne,
If she only knew. :) Revenge is never good. I really enjoyed this :) Have a great weekend :)
I am a lover of words. It would be soo very hard for me to limit a story to 55. With that being said, job well done!
Communication is so hard, especially between the sexes, it's a wonder we ever get anything right. I especially liked the rhythm of your poem.
Cee
Jingle Belle...
Jumping to conclusions can get you in trouble.
Excellent 55 My Dear!!
Than you so much for this fine contribution with a message..
Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
wow. sad.
Oh, what a sad misunderstanding!
Well done Jingle....:-) Hugs
Wow...Revenge in itself is a misconception too. Great 55!
Nice 55, Jingle. Revenge is always bitter. Not the right thing to do in any situation.
Wow! Oh the sad deception of misconceived perception!
Blessings & Aloha!
Ohhhh - best-friends arms is very bad
I think that would hurt a man twice
Hard blow!
awwww
nice one jingle ^^
Succinct and to the point!
Happy Pink Saturday, Jingle!
XO,
Sheila :-)
All too often...
Great reminder about jumping to conclusions.
oh wow all she had to do was ask!!
wow thats a great story and in only 55 words wow
Oh well in my ventures I did find
Something wrong in my mind
As to follow him to another spot
It seems familiar I have not forgot
As to find the lover in their caress
To get up and leave this ugly mess
enjoy Jingle, HAPPY SATURDAY TO YA(+)
soulbro*:)xo
Jingle: Neat story. Shows how wrong we can be. Oh, that tendency to jump to conclusions! D
So clever..yes, we must be careful!
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