Being a piece of wall
is not enjoyable at all.
Unlike a door
that opens and closes,
I am grounded on the floor,
Listening to life's imperfect proses.
I spy ghosts
Winking at 55 word challenge posts.
I protect,
I also reflect
and detect.
If u r a wall,
how would u feel after all?
Unlike a door
that opens and closes,
I am grounded on the floor,
Listening to life's imperfect proses.
I spy ghosts
Winking at 55 word challenge posts.
I protect,
I also reflect
and detect.
If u r a wall,
how would u feel after all?
*****
Flash Friday 55 is hosted by G-man at:
http://g-man-mrknowitall.blogspot.com/
This is entered for Thursday Thinking Tank-Wall at Poets United
http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/2010/09/thursday-think-tank-prompt-14.html
46 comments:
Excellent my friend. The Wall knows all it seems to me :)
Walls can be good and bad. They protect us from certain things and yet they can also isolate us. This is a predicament.
That is beautiful & a wall is so important too.
Caroline
bricked up and stonewalled
nice 55!
Jingle Belle...
No wall is too tall to climb with a little help.
Loved your 55..
Thanks for visiting, and always posting a Class Contribution..
Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
Like a wall, your 55 is solid and up-standing, Jingle!
Have a great weekend!
This wall can be a safe guard or a prison . only the individual can determine which wall this is.
Yvonne.
Wonderful and charming, Jingle. Your 55 reminds me of that brilliant part in "A Midsummer Night's Dream" where one of the Mechanicals has to play a wall in their drama :D
Jingle this is truly wonderful!
:-)
Very nice! I love the 55's! I REALLY have to try one soon! happy weekend!
Wonderful work, Jingle! =)
-Weasel
This is great! So well done--how would a wall feel? (and don't we all build them) Thank you.
Enjoyed this, Jingle. I've climbed a few walls in my day, but I never thought about how they might feel about it - lol!
brilliant dear, a wall has many uses and can also be used to hide things xx
I fall for your wall poem!
Jingle,
Your words are appreciative of walls.........
Protection and security.
A place to go.......
Nice poetry prompt,
Eileen
Lovely Poem Jingle.. Wall at its best...
--Someone Is Special--
This is a wonderful poem. It looks more like an Ebenezer than a wall.
So imaginative. Fun to read. Thanks.
this was a lot of fun. Puts the mind to thinking ;)
Sounds fun and cute!:3 I love it =P Thank for sharing Jingle :D
Wall has many aspect of life---it protect,it reflect,it give you security --and in other aspect it is symbol of hurdle also.....overall it's nice poetry.
I love the first half ! you allowed yourself to be inside- the weight, the infrequent steps, passing shadows.
That wall at least is porous so when you became fearful, impatient, you had a way out and made like a ghost-
I absolutely loved this! :o)
Love the rhyming Jingle!
Pamela
I'm thinking I might like to be part of a wall....
Loved this poem, Jingle!
I loved the musical flow of this poem, Jingle...a dance of words in my head...:)
What is that in front of me
It is so tall I cannot see
Is it an obstacle made of block
Such structure stronger than rock
With no opening it is no door
It is a wall, and what is it for?
enjoy Jingle and Happy Saturday to ya(+)
soulbro*:)xo---{--@
good one!
A very creative Ode to a wall. I love it!
Fun poem :-)
There's a tree museum in Switzerland where each tree is in front of a stone wall. The walls are amazing backdrops for the trees. If I were one of those walls, I'd actually be pretty happy :-)
Kelly
That is a beautiful poem on the autobiography of a wall :)
sweeet jingle X)
Cute!
Dear Jingle,
Your empathy shows...you can even feel for the wall!
lovely!
Walls are supportive!
Nice 55.
Well done, I agree with Yvonne~
Walls can be good or bad, it is how it effects one's life! Great imagery!
hope you are having a great weekend.
Definitely makes you think !!! good one Jingle :D
Lovely take on the prompt my dear- me likey!!!
I think if I were a wall I'd feel very solid. I might not mind that.
As a wall, I stall those that ball and shout so that you can call the shots...Belated thanks for reading my Friday 55. Hope your week goes well
depends on the purpose of the wall....is is part of a home or a prison?
great 55! walls have feelings? i always thought they held them in or kept them out. Nice perspective!
If these walls could talk, the stories they would tell! Great post.
Nice brickwork my friend ;)
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