What's your fate?
What kind of life style in your plate?
If you refuse to tell,
Then I don't know.
Let's talk about mine
While we have a sip of wine.
I never yield to any power,
I won't sell my pride even if it is only for an hour.
I love my own name,
No blame game.
I prefer to smile or grin,
I love to be free from discouraging thing.
But, in case I fail,
I won't wail.
If I break a rule,
I will admit it and stay true.
If I lose my job,
I won't go to streets to rob.
If I am hit by a car,
I will accept my fate and find ways to heal my scar.
If death arrives,
I will delete my files from my hard drives,
I will smile like a cauliflower,
And seal my life with one last shower.
*****
Submitted to writer's island :Unleash"..
and also to Poetry Pantry at Poets United
*****
Submitted to writer's island :Unleash"..
and also to Poetry Pantry at Poets United
37 comments:
Very nice my friend :)
But, in case I fail,
I won't wail.
If I break a rule,
I will admit it and stay true.
This part would make a perfect banner, too - good one!
I'm with Thom, very nice and heartfelt.
This is a great and upbeat poem.
Great poem Jingle but never have no doubts as doubts do not have growth in them in which I kind of figure you will never have doubts anyways as you are always upbeat...enjoy and have a great Saturday as well(+)
soulbro:)xo---{--@
A great ppoem Jingle and wonderful to read.
Yvonne.
Jingle your are my kind of gal! I love the integrity of this poem.
great post ji, im full of flu, but still smilin xxx
Lovely Poem Ji..
--Someone Is Special--
"I will smile like a cauliflower" made me smile.
A very creative and fruitful poem, Jingle!
Very fun and uplifting, your creativity always amazes me. take care.
this is awesome jingle. you have a wonderful spirit.
shubho bijoyadashami (happy vijayadashami)!
trisha
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freelance fun. It's a rare thing these days to own ones self.
This made me smile! I love your name too, Jingle!
I love the line "I will smile like a cauliflower".........made me smile, too!
You're good, Jingle!! Defiant and soulful with the rhythm of a song.
This is wonderful! You are such a talent - thank you too for your sweet comments and for your support, I really appreciate you and will check out the challenge you mentioned, xoxo
Integrity! Nice!
nice poem ^_^
...I never yield to any power,
I won't sell my pride even if it is only for an hour.
I love my own name,
No blame game.
I prefer to smile or grin,...
...yes indeed!...always love your positivity. (^_^)
Very creative, Jingle! Awesome post! =)
-Weasel
i like your style of writing! thanks so much for stopping by my site. glad to have found out about you, too!
An inspiration!Nice Jingle
Very nice poem. It made me smile.
Caroline
Very nice. This is evidence of your self-awareness, which I'm sure enhances your creativity.
Very nice!
Very Nice..a splendid way of life :)
this was just beautiful. a lovely piece
And it goes like this and it goes like that, I found myself rhyming while reading, nice one
"smile like cauliflower..." Love it. Love and Light, Sender
great poem...love smile like a cauliflower!
Jingle,
'smile like cauliflower' I love that.
Pamela
Good one, and I like that photo!
wonderful, playful, courageous! Thank you so much for stopping by my blog and for your kind comments!
Thank you so much for all your kind comments. It is nice to meet you.
I really enjoyed your poem!
You really jingle and leave behind a message, a moral with a tingle.
Keep jingling!
Shail
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