Look, If there is one thing I've learned,
It's That
Learning is observing, My friend!
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Sunbeams glittering outside my window,
The air is cool,
The whispers of the breeze in the shadow
Make me wonder who are you.
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Today turns into yesterday tomorrow,
Tears wash away sorrow.
Happiness cannot come without pain,
Not all clouds drip the rain.
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Like a tiger in a den,
Individual power cannot always win.
Like a chicken popping out a shell,
You need many failures to live well.
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Life is imperfect,
No path leads you to the perfect.
Believe that the sun will shine,
You can survive and feel divine!
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This is submitted to Carry On Tuesday,
And We Write Poems (Crossroad)!
28 comments:
So true my friend.
I love the way you share your insight and wisdom.
Oh, and thank you for your visit to my art blog and your kind comments.
Inspired words, Jingle.
Hiya Jingle, You walk the walk and talk the talk...Especially True "Happiness cannot come without pain."
Bless you sweet friend. Love CML x
Very true Ji..
--Someone Is Special--
gorgeous Jingle, and very true.
'Not all clouds drip with rain'
and, thankfully,
not all experiences end in pain :-)
Like the positive note in the poem.
fabulous, wise and beautiful.
a wonderful poem jingle.
lots of love
trisha
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Loved the words excellent poem.
Yvonne.
I love the title..brilliant - and the last line was a real clincher! Very nicely done. Thanks for your visit..Jae
You do have a good heart Jingle to come out with such wonderful words. Loved the last two verses immensely.
Lots to think about here.
Love that picture!
Thanks, Jingle!
Your lovely words are true and comforting.
I love what you've written- so true- especially that Life is imperfect- indeed it is and that's what makes it wonderful! Thanks so much for the recent visits and comments and invitations...it is so very much appreciated!!!
well written jingle
so very true..beautiful Ji ♥
I like this, many good thoughts in here!
I loved that title xxx
I love the title to this... so beautiful and introspective. The rhythms and rhymes are great, too.
My Carry on Tuesday is here.
I love this; "believe that the sun will shine"...so powerful~
Yes, pain we have to know this to truly experience joy~ Great poem!!!
Jingle,
this is my first time here and I am impressed. You really have a superb power of observation and not all know to take a lesson from that.
You listed some in verse which is an even bigger talent!!
LOved it...:D
Lucid and very well structured.
Lucid and very well structured.
"Real is better than perfect." which I first heard said by my much missed friend Mort Satten, is a personal mantra which your poe echoes.
Life at the cross roads
A time to reflect
A time to change
Know the pitfalls
Don't close your eyes
Perfection isn't in our world
The dew drops sometimes
Reminding the time; the journey
Tears have to fall
Learn the pain know the songs
When the tears drying up
A wise person transforms
Experience counts
It isn't a rope to life
Every day you see
The sun bathes differently
On the cross roads
Don't be afraid to take
I love 'Not all clouds drip the rain'. So true!
Just loved your poem ..
Thanks Jingle for all your support and nice comments..
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