Prisoned inside,
My imagination has gone for a wild ride.
*
Budding tree leaves,
Bursting blossoms,
Bubbling breeze,
Brain-storming classrooms.
This is Spring!
*
Blue pools,
Bright skies,
Banned Schools,
Burning desires.
This is Summer.
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Brown earth,
Beaming faces,
Beautiful births,
Blasting graces,
This is Autumn.
*
Blowing snow,
Barren fields,
Bittersweet frost,
Bare trees.
This is Winter.
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Magpie Tale #36
The Imperfect Prose
55 comments:
There is truly so much beauty beyond that open window. This was a beautiful journey of all seasons...nice Magpie Jingle! I really liked it!
you captured four of my favorite seasons so perfectly!! well done
Fantastic I love what you have done with the four seasons
Lovely words, lovely take on the seasons..
--Someone Is Special--
Wonderful way to look at winter...you always see the positive and that is wonderful...bkm
Prison inside indeed! Loved how you switched seasons. Clever and funny.
I liked your descriptive "B" quatrains for each season. Nice work, Jingle!
A most enjoyable poem thanks for sharing.
Yvonne
Nice to have the change of seasons!
Good job. You covered a lot of ground with just a little space.
great work! I like the way you play with "B" and the seasons.
fantastic!
:)
Fun ! sometimes sounds really get us moving, I realized this morning we are coming around to the tougher time of year for me. I need to become a 'snow
bunny'!
hey,
lovely journey of all the seasons.
" Blue pools,
Bright skies,
Banned Schools,Burning desires.
This is Summer. "
exquisite lines to say the least.
Beee-ootiful prose and alliteration! The four seasons motif is one of my favourites. - G
Lovely B's and reasons to be outdoors!
I love the beautiful births of Autumn. It's so true! Among my colleagues we just had a huge rash of birthdays. nice catch
A full year of -- LIFE!
a lovely journey through the seasons! Thank you.
Jingle this is wonderful. I miss summer.
Ah..nice concept.. this is like Marcel Proust taking us for a tour..
Well Played with letter B and seasons----very attractive.
Best wishes.
Hemant
Just beautiful!
What fabulous writings!!! I thought I was a follower but I just found out I was not...SO I have signed on to follow!
Have a great day!
Coralie
Spectacular imagery, Jingle. Love this.
Sweet winter. :) I love this.
Winter is coming, and pretty soon I will like a prisoner too. Your poem is fabulous!
Seasonal bliss! I think we all need to let our imaginations out for a wild ride every now and then! :-)
Love your imagination's wild ride Jingle! Truly wonderful! :-)
The four seasons, always enjoyed much more from outside!
one can only enjoy the seasons outside, if winter inside xxx
I loved this snapshot of all four seasons...it reminds me of a picture that was in my house as I was growing up
The vibrant colours have no longer here
The bite of the air becomes crystal clear
The dead of season draws upon
The material world outside the snow will sit on
But there is hope as spring will come again
To start all over as it did then...
Great Poem Jingle and Happy Thursday to ya(+)
soulbro*:)xo---{--@
Lovely. The words are perfect.
xo Erin
What a brilliant image of someone inside yearning and recalling the seasons. It makes me wonder who this person is and why she or he must stay inside.
Su-sieee! Mac
This and That. Here and There. Now, Sometimes Then.
love "blasting graces." thanks for linking jingle.
lovely all 4 seasons thru that Dutch door!
this poem is great for the mgpie. and yor 4 season discription is top notch.
Love this look at the seasons - lovely words!
Neat way to address the seasons--winter is my favorite. Lovely magpie.
I loved this...all the wonderful seasons!
Perfect description of seasons.
very perfectly blended Jingle.
lots of love.
trisha
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Jingle, this is pure genius..I felt all the seasons!
Hi Jingle,
Thanks for the visit! That's how I feel right now: prisoned inside! (I feel I'm dying a slow death from pneumonia LOL) Joking aside your poetry is a blessing. Thanks for sharing.
Anne-Marie
Wonderful four-season poem. I like it a lot.
And thanks for visiting my blog. Words of encouragement always help.
Kay, Alberta
Very well done, Jingle.
Let's hear it for "wild ride." I fancy that ... lovingly allertravite... moving though the seasons ... Thanks, Ji. Full of fancy and grace.
Lovely words for all the seasons.
Beautiful!
Oh I love this; each season is so beaufitful, I love them all.
What a beauty...Loved it!
This is so much fun and so nicely written. I loved the loping rhythm and the imagery. Great magpie!
the four seasons through one window--perfect!
great job...love all the B words and a nice idea on the photo prompt to describe the four seasons.
What a fun expression of the seasons as seen through the open window.
Nice.
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