Forecast says it's going to snow tomorrow,
So I shall cherish my time today,
I don't want to be reminded any sorrow
of what happened or will occur anyway,
The will to be free is tense,
The reasons don't have to make any sense,
I wish to stay calm and be real,
Being myself is a big deal.
I shall try my best to be current,
nothing will stop me from valuing my present.
33 comments:
Amen to that! Love this poem!
Blessings, Joanne
inspiring write. :D
True words, written beautifully. laurie @ Battling My Inner Critic
a poem of wisdom...being in the moment.
assuaging fear and discontent.
well done. good poem.
I agree! Life is now! What was is gone, and if it snows, we'll deal with it! Great poem. Love it!
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yes, it is. :)
Only the here and now matters. Good advice. :)
Being yourself is a big deal! Excellent point, I enjoyed reading.
Hello.
We can only think of the present...no need to worry of what has yet to pass.
Nicely expressed!
Thanks for sharing & for the visit/comment. I appreciate them.
Bashful Lady
Wise words, indeed :-)
Hopeful. :)
Mihir
Very true indeed! More people should have this outlook in life for sure. As for the poem, very wonderful - I liked how you didn't follow the abab style of rhyme, to me it felt like you were following your own rhythm, and it went well with the message of your poem :).
Thank you for sharing!
... and besides all the other models are taken (: Seriously, this is a good message.
I love this moment! Being here right now :)
Very self aware.
lovely words...nicely crafted lines!
Very wonderful reflection!
Great ending and love the rhyme throughout
That's a good lesson, and one that I've been trying to teach myself.
Great resolution! Hard to keep.
being one's self is a very big deal. wonderful poem.
that's right, i believe it.. nice reminder :)
You've captured brilliantly how difficult it is when we try to stay in the present. Great write
Very good!
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So very true and well written :)
Yes, that's the key, I guess, to being oneself is to really be in the present. It is a challenging practice, but one with rich rewards.
I like the inclusion of the idea of snow forecast for the next day.
Loved the title...
Beautifully written
A lovely read
ahhh! i love this title! :)
You already have the recipe, just go in there and get it right. In the end you'd come out being greatly yourself. Just keep it real.
Cheers!
Hello dear Jingle, hope you are well, thanks for visiting me, I am sorry its been a while work has been very hectic, less time for the computer these days, I loved this piece, it was superb, also the poem I wrote was for Gerardines dog Uriah, who sadly passed away,I will try to visit more regularly, I never forget old friends xx
Hey Jingle thought I'd stop by and I'm glad I did - originality is very important to me and you show more than most people ever will, take care
Being true to one's self is ALWAYS a big deal.... thanks for reminding me :-)
Wise words, lovely poem :)
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