Sunday, October 9, 2011

Sunday 160 on He


His heart is clear like water,
When he loves,
His words calm the sea,
hanging in the evening sky,
impress us,
one by one,
into his galaxy.
He is my Valentine.

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Monkey Man Sunday 160

14 comments:

Suzy Q said...

Oooh, delicious flow of words there.

Monkey Man said...

Very lovely. Thanks for playing along with the Sunday 160.

Brian Miller said...

awww...cute message and a nice flow...made me smile....

Mama Zen said...

Gorgeous!

theborgpoet said...

Thanks for sharing.:)

mindsinger said...

sweet sentiment and sweet words! thanks.

zongrik said...

he isn't just your world, he's your galaxy.

Andy said...

Hello.
Hmm...I think he's your all.

Nicely expressed!

Thanks for sharing & visiting.

Woman As My Friend And Lover

Caroline said...

Beautiful <3

welcome to my world of poetry said...

Wonderful

Yvonne.

Marbles in My Pocket said...

Very nice! I love Valentine poems!

http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/09/three-in-dreams/

turtlememoir said...

Beautiful imagery...

When he loves,
His words calm the sea,
hanging in the evening sky,


...just reading these words has a calming effect. Thank you!

Teresa Marie said...

Very, very nice! I love the last line best :) Great job! Blessings, Terri

Ann LeFlore said...

this is so nicely expressed and the flow is excellent
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/10/the-bird-of-love/