Tuesday, October 11, 2011

Love Survives



First date, coming nigh,
His face shines with scarlet pride,
Hard not to smile wide.
.
They meet, right on time,
Side by side, their heartbeats rhyme,
no words, but hot thoughts.
.
All of a sudden,
big raindrops pour, wetting them,
Befuddled, they hug.
.
Shyness disappears,
First kiss in romantic tears,
Love survives, Cheers.

9 comments:

Ann LeFlore said...

Such a lovely romantic poem you have done and it fits so well with the theme thanks for sharing
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/10/the-bird-of-love/#comment-1650

Marbles in My Pocket said...

A sweet and timeless poem. Very nice!

http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/09/three-in-dreams/

welcome to my world of poetry said...

Another wonderful poem.

Yvonne.

The Unknowngnome said...

Another sweet treat.

LBTL said...

I think nature wanted the kiss to happen and destiny took over :)
that was a sweet and romantic one, enjoyable! :)

Jaya J said...

sweeet !

Bijaylaxmi said...

Lovely presentation of love...:)

Jenny said...

Hi! I am so sorry but I totally can't find your link to SC - He Stole my Soul. When I get to that page it only shows a title and no words. Is it possible you could send me a correct link so I can see what I'm doing wrong?

Thank you so much.

jennymatlock at cox dot net

Suzy said...

Thanks for visiting my blog. Nice haiku.