Home alone
With everyone else is gone,
The house grows cold,
I need something to hold.
If I pick up the phone,
Call you:
"would you mind coming along?"
"Yes."
I expect to hear you respond.
Let's sing a song,
Let's dance
And go wild once,
Let's enjoy a date
With our desires beautifully pursued.
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40 comments:
Sometimes we just need a friend to cheer us up.
Home alone could be fun if it's like the movie.
It's good to know there is always someone at the other end of the phone,
Yvonne.
Love this poem -- delightfully playful
Joanny
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That was cute. I like being alone sometimes. It is something I miss out on now that the children are home for summer.
Warm wishes,
CG
a phone is an integral part of living and we all need one, great post dear, happy thursday :)
beautiful
If only....can I pick anyone to call ;)
when we are down, all we need is a phone call. nice 55
I can't imagine you being alone Jingle, so this must be fiction!!
Excellent 55 My Friend...
Thanks for playing, thanks for visiting, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...Galen
Love it !! Have a great Friday !!
Caroline
when you actually want to be home alone,all those wonders that you can do sounds fun and exciting. but when you are actually alone , the fun quickly dies away.. true true
Is that why you go by Jingle? Nice 55.
A 55 we can all appreciate. Nice 55!
very nice! Now I am trying to think who this friend in my life might be.
Good one.
I love to have a friend come over to sing and dance or to kick their butt at some Wii bowling ... lol
'desires beautifully pursued' Sultry. Great 55. My 55 is HERE .
Re: Eric:
G-man does not my last one, kind of boring...thus I have worked hard to do one that is somewhat interesting...not my character...
what a wonderful invitation and a great 55!
yes, let's sing and song and dance. that's the movement of this piece. nice!
I get voice mail instead of a person...
Gosh, I missed commenting here:
This is GREAT...come on over, let's DO some things--a date. Then leave, and maybe one day we shall do it all over again--FRIEND!
This is real, freedom...unfettered love of one plus one, each for the other.
Thank YOU, Jingle! (Sorry, just cannot make the "poetic" scene. Hope you understand. Can we still be friends? (I do not mean "dance, go wild, desires pursued, etc"--grin!!!!)
Here is MINE
A beautiful and uplifting 55, Jingle. Every wonderful word is a delight! :D
Nice 55. Home alone is sometimes very nice.
Nice 55. Home alone is sometimes very nice.
Oh, yes! This works!
I always enjoy reading the 55. You have a way with it.
great 55!
There are more lonely people then we suspect. The telephone is a great means to get contact. But there are times it's nice to be alone at home: you can then do what you want.
This so relates to my day today. I'm experiencing the famous empty-nest syndrome. I did the shopping, reading, the watching TV, the walking, going out with a friend, nothing seems to ease it. I'll take menopause anytime over this issue...there are no pills for it. LOL
Knees up mother brown! My 55
I love home alone!!
thanks for all the comments! you rock!
This is a lovely poem! :)
It's nice when you call a friend and they're there for you.
Awesome 55, Jingle!
I love dancing and having a friend to call! I love the pictures you paint. I am smiling all over.
"With our desires beautifully pursued"...
Wow, what a *great* line!
Nice 55, Jingle...and thanks for stopping by and commenting on mine, too. :)
-C
very nice and so true! enjoy the weekend!
Great flash 55!
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