A Pink flower admires her sister Red,
she dreams about being Gold,
she wishes to be Green,
As she grows,
Pink is the only color her body shows,
So Pink knows
Life is NOT as perfect as a rose.
Now she feels good
As soon as she understood
that she is unique in her neighborhood.
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Write a poem or a story in 55 words. Give it a try and notify G-man at:
http://g-man-mrknowitall.blogspot.com/
This is also an entry for pink Saturday at:
http://howsweetthesound.typepad.com/my_weblog/
42 comments:
Love the lesson tucked inside your neat 55, Jingle. We should all celebrate our uniqueness.
Yes Jingle Jangle..
It IS still Friday.
And Rose by any other name smells just as sweet...
Excellent 55 My Friend...Thanks
Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
We always think that someone else has better than what we do. Pleasant pink poem, Jingle.
this is brilliant!!
Many Flower-Peeps have these thoughts and feelings, also. Hopefully we/they can reach the same conclusion--that each of us IS unique in our very own way, upon our very own path.
Thank you, Jingle..To see my "55" GO HERE
I like your pink poem..especially since it is one of my favorite colors. I am sure "pink" will someday appreciate her color and not wish to be any other. Happy Saturday!
Very nice my friend :)
Really good Jingle, we are indeed all unique.
The message was very evident. loved the words.
Yvonne.
Wow this is powerful yet so rosy. I really admire those who could do the 55.
Love it! I'll have to think on this one. Hope you have a wonderful PInk SAturday and WELCOME!
Sherry @ A Happy Valentine
You are a very good with your Jingles. I used to do a little poem writing, but seems my thinking went on the blink. I enjoyed your post.
If red were green,
And green were red,
And yellow were but blue,
Then where would that leave
Happy Pink? Oh, what would that girl do?
I'm glad that red is merely red,
That yellow is yellow, too,
But mostly I am glad that pink is the very finest hue!
Happy Pink Saturday...
XO,
Sheila :-)
How's that? I hit it rigt on the nose, Jingle! ;-)
By that I mean 50 words, and I didn't try. It just sort of happened. ;-)
Nice 55 words about Pink Rose!
Happy Weekend!
Pink is my granddaughters favorite color...but she could not explain that in 55 words.
Lovely poem and post.
Happy Pink Saturday Jingle.
" Regina "
Uniqueness is what makes us stand out in the crowd. How do you do this in 55 words?
That is a lovely poem !
Love from ♥RINI♥ and a happy Pink Saturday
I love pink flowers. Have a great weekend.
I love it and I love the pink flower. Totally awesome
Caroline
pink flowers are amazing, loved your 55 @)
Happy Pink Saturday Ji...
Absolutely beautiful. What an awesome job you did. I am clapping for you sweetie. Can you hear me? Please take a bow. Awesome.
Yes celebrate our uniqueness for sure. I love those hidden messages in poems. Sadly some folks never even get it, they read right over the top.
Thank you for sharing today. Have a wonderful Pink Saturday.
Country hugs sweetie...Sherry
Wonderful poem, Jingle...a true and timeless message, woven into your magical words! :)
I love the pink!!
Hope your having a great weekend.
Embrace the pink!
ooh, wise words! that 55 tells a perfect tale of appreciating oneself just the way we are...and pink is perfect! good one, jingle!
wickedddd i love it :)
nice post!
in 55, you are funny, insightful and a story-teller. quite impressive.
This is a beautiful poem holding a lovely message. Nice 55.
Smiles...
Neat poem there Jingle! I love the way you subtlety put in the part about uniqueness. :)
Lovely! Wish you a great sunday!
Such beautiful 55 words with a great message. Nice picture too.
Unique is something you learn to be proud of!
Of course Rose should celebrate her uniqueness. :)
lovely Jingle - have a Wonderful Sunday...
Also, I am slowly moving from Wordpress to Blogspot...more options....bkm
Very colorful 55!
Happy MOnday.
so very lovely jingle- a pretty flower is yearning to be something else, never knowing the truth that she is simply gorgeous.
Lovely message, nicely told!
:)
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