I spy
Stars in sky,
Trees bend under breeze,
A bunny behaves funny,
A bear pulls his hair,
A fawn is chased at dawn,
And a rose dreams about water from a hose.
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What can you say in 160 characters? (spaces included)
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Many thanks for reading it.
For all of YOU who has been following Jingle, or commenting for her,or reading this post, the angel is for You, hope that she brings you safety, security, love,
wisdom, and happiness in the days, weeks, months to come!
Thank You for the Friendship and Fun!
Happy Sunday!
U R The Best!
41 comments:
I spy a lovely lady beginning with J xx
loved this xxx
Thank you for the lovely poem, the angel and sharing your beautiful spirit!
Thank you for your lovely poem and angel .
Have a good week.
Yvonne.
I spy a house on the edge of the woods.
Very nice.
...your prose, full of whimsy and fun, a perfect 160 for a lovely sunday! jingle, u rock :)
Thank you for the lovely 160 and the protective angel. You are most kind. Have a terrific week.
What a lovely 160.
The title reminds me of a game our family used to play as we traveled by car from Washington, D.C. to Illinois each summer. It would be someone's turn and they would say, "I Spy ___" (like a black and white cow) then the other players would look for one and whoever saw it first called out, "I Spy". Very old fun memory.
PG
A beautiful 160, Jingle, as always; uplifting and a delight to read.
2coolJinglebell....
so lovely, thank you Jingle. Have a beautiful week to come :-)
A charming & whimsical 160 ... I really enjoyed this Jingle!
Thank you so much for the beautiful angel & thank you for your friendship & fun also!! Have a great week!
that rose is very thirsty!! haha i love your poem!! you're so creative :)
and i love that angel picture too
this is a sweet 160, Jingle!!
What a truly beautiful and uplifting 160, Jingle.
well done!
hugs
shakira
Wonderful poem and lovely angel,,,,happy to have her,,,,thank you
A lovely 160. I really enjoyed the images that it inspired.
Good wishes for a happy week ahead!
that was lovely!
Wonderful! Thanks so much for sharing...
Wow a nice poem ji, U are really a talented writer... to say m in love with your writings :)
The rose dreaming of water from the hose caught my fancy. Thanks for the angel, Jingle.
Beautiful as always. I am now a follower too.
Hope to see you for "Mia Monday".
It must be late spring as this is a delight
I see how this happiness is as it all goes right
All of mother nature is moving around
The stars in the sky do not make a sound
But with all this activity happening it seems
You may watch all this going on but its the rose that only dreams
enjoy Jingle and Happy Monday to you(+)
soulbro*:)
Very nice..
love the photo.
and i love spying stars in the sky too:)
Nice poeme :)
I love the lively beat of your poem. You did a great job! Correct if I'm wrong, but for some reason, I think you are young. And really, nothing is better than being youthful and happy. It's a dear treasure, hold on to it as long as you can.
Thank you for the lovely angel, Jingle.
Bless you.
Lovely 160. Beautiful and cute as always...:)
Thank you for the angel. Cute poem, too. Have a great week...
That reminds me I need to go water my roses, thanks!
I think YOU can say anything lovely in ANY amount of words!!! You're terrific!!! Love, Janine XO
Thank you jungle and I hope angels are around you as well. :)
What a clever poem! YOu are very talented. Thank you for reading my story.
I saw some deer by a watering hole at dusk. It would have been cute to see fawns chasing each other at dawn. Cute poem.
Very nice. My kids used to love I Spy games and books.
hey. thanks for reading picky and leaving it some love.
Thank you for the angel, Jingle. Your spirit shines through her :)
You are a talented writer! This was very clever Jingle. Thank you for the beautiful angel wishes!
A beautiful Angel! Thank you. Very cute verse!
lovely 160.
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