Friday, August 12, 2011

Free Write Friday-My Turn To Confess As A Fox




“A fox is tricky!”
Animals in the forest turned picky.
Hearing it, I feel fuzzy,
I wish to kick those who are bossy.
.
Tigers prowl about their den,
A rooster woos a charming chicken,
A girl squeezes her teddy bear’s ear,
Trooping along the river are teenage deer.
.
I’m a fix who holds my vexations,
I depend on my sixth sense to detect relations,
Stop pulling my tail,
Remove your unfitting pail.
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Do you know the grains of dust in my dinning table?
Is any one of them worth your trouble?
My master is invisible and forceful,
You’re got to be smart and careful!

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This is written for Free Write Fridays at Magic in The Backyard:

12 comments:

Anonymous said...

powerful writing...


The Purple

welcome to my world of poetry said...

Excellent read, I read it a couple of times. most enjoyable.

Yvonne,

magicinthebackyard said...

Thank you for contributing this great piece to Free Write Friday!

Nelson said...

Hello my friend! Always nice to come back to read your beautiful article. Very understandable , simple and elegant. I wish a excellent weekend for you, with very smiles and peace! Visit me too. Greetings from Rio de Janeiro/Brasil.

lynnaima said...

clever rhymes, not forced, cool storyline, real nice! :)
Happy potluck!!!

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the critics said...

LOVELY.......NICE RHYMING

Eternally Distracted said...

Lovely :)

Jyoti Mishra said...

brilliant confession !!
You did it really well.

Arlee Bird said...

We're all trying to survive in our own God-given ways.


Lee
Tossing It Out

johnewordslinger said...

I lthink this is neat, and witty, :), thank you, WS

Jenny said...

What clever writing.

I read it through several times and got additional meaning out of each reading.

Thanks for linking to Alphabe-Thursday's letter "S".

Your post was fun and different.

A+