The world is small
when people stand tall;
The world is big
If anger/wars are the ones to dig;
The world is a family
If everyone strives for harmony;
The world is beautiful
If members are respectful;
As challenges/issues continue threading life’s elegance,
WE must spread hope, faith, and peace of patience!
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47 comments:
Lovely thoughts, and images!
This is beautiful!!! ...and oh, how true! :)
You know what is the most amazing thing in your poems? The simplicity, which directly connects with the reader.
Nice thoughts indeed. :)
Yes indeed. Gandhi said 'I we are to really tackle ending all war, we must first begin with the children'
He is so right, if every child were to grow without thinking in terms of hatred, race and never-ending 'I want's the world could help cure itself.
Lovely prose.
This was poetry at it;s best.
Yvonne.
Amen to that!
Blessings, Joanne
I like this piece of peace. Didn't know the rally was on again. Will check it out. Well done.
Patience is Peace
"As challenges/issues continue threading life’s elegance"
Nice line.
Thanks for sharing.
Genebrother
lovely words...beautifully crafted lines!
Very nice message and very nicely penned down!
Alcina
Very nice poem. Thanks for sharing!
Very nice poem. Love the thoughts!
beautiful write
Nice poem
I like this one--though I found the "/" choices to be distracting. Might just be my ADD though :P
Great words of wisdom here. Well written! (May I be bold though and say that I also found the "/" choices distracting. I think it would have flowed better without them.) A very good message :)
...The world is a family
If everyone strives for harmony;
The world is beautiful
If members are encouraging/respectful...
...absolutely...love the optimism in your words.
nice choice of words- keep it up! glad to be of acquaintance through thursday poets- my posting this week~ http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/08/04/strength-of-faith/
WE must spread hope, faith, and peace of patience!
Nice ending to a message and reminder for each of us. It must begin with us; creating a ripple effect that spreads from the center.
Nicely done.. a sense of honesty is what comes through!
here's my entry this week: http://wp.me/p1hI0l-7w
True ..the world revolves around love
Beautiful <3
I love how you say "members" Indeed we are all members of this exclusive club called Earth. Let's not take it for granted! Peace be with you friend.
I love the first two lines!
The world is a family
If everyone strives for harmony
Thank you for your part in creating harmoney and a poetry community based on respect!
Very nice, Jingle. I wish people would put anger behind them. It would make all our lives so much better. D
So true! Uplifting thoughts. Thanks for sharing them.
True statements all-- nicely phrased!
The word that came to my mind was "eloquent"!
A beautiful message.. thanks for sharing this ~
what a great message~
our mindset is everything.
The first four lines are my favorite: aptly written and I am happy I got to enjoy it.
So poetically simple. I could almost hear music........!
Simple but perfect in delivering your imagination through words.
This is beautiful. Beautiful world is born out of beautiful thoughts :)
Very lovely poem with a beautiful message of peace. Blessings!
so true! well said! ♥
Your poetry has many deep thoughts.Beautifully written.
Melanie
Outstanding message...well said!
A wonderful message that longs to be spread. Excellent. Happy Rally.
Outstanding and such lovely thoughts I am so happy to read this. My share this first rally for me is http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2011/08/agreement-for-thursday-poets-rally-week.html
If only everybody in the world thought so... Perfection!
Nicely Written, and your words are true, to bad though that some things are to deeply ingrained in some cultures...
Well Well done. ^^
http://ankokuhikaru.wordpress.com/2011/08/30/poetry-lips-which-never-touch/
well written.
its positive message was really
cool.
thank you for sharing this.
A lovely ode to the responsibility of respectability!
Wow, awesome poem! Blessings, Terri
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