Wednesday, August 24, 2011

A Picnic At Poets Rally Week 50 (Peace of Patience)



The world is small
when people stand tall;
The world is big
If anger/wars are the ones to dig;
The world is a family
If everyone strives for harmony;
The world is beautiful
If members are respectful;
As challenges/issues continue threading life’s elegance,
WE must spread hope, faith, and peace of patience!



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48 comments:

inaweblogisback said...

Lovely thoughts, and images!

~L said...

This is beautiful!!! ...and oh, how true! :)

mihirvatsa said...

You know what is the most amazing thing in your poems? The simplicity, which directly connects with the reader.

Nice thoughts indeed. :)

Daydreamertoo said...

Yes indeed. Gandhi said 'I we are to really tackle ending all war, we must first begin with the children'
He is so right, if every child were to grow without thinking in terms of hatred, race and never-ending 'I want's the world could help cure itself.
Lovely prose.

welcome to my world of poetry said...

This was poetry at it;s best.
Yvonne.

Joanne said...

Amen to that!
Blessings, Joanne

Tigerbrite said...

I like this piece of peace. Didn't know the rally was on again. Will check it out. Well done.

genebrother said...

Patience is Peace
"As challenges/issues continue threading life’s elegance"
Nice line.
Thanks for sharing.
Genebrother

Kalyan said...

lovely words...beautifully crafted lines!

Alcina said...

Very nice message and very nicely penned down!

Alcina

m said...

Very nice poem. Thanks for sharing!

Marbles in My Pocket said...

Very nice poem. Love the thoughts!

Rajlakshmi said...

beautiful write

antomaniax said...

Nice poem

wordcoaster said...

I like this one--though I found the "/" choices to be distracting. Might just be my ADD though :P

Poetry and Icecream said...

Great words of wisdom here. Well written! (May I be bold though and say that I also found the "/" choices distracting. I think it would have flowed better without them.) A very good message :)

Dasuntoucha said...

...The world is a family
If everyone strives for harmony;
The world is beautiful
If members are encouraging/respectful
...

...absolutely...love the optimism in your words.

fiveloaf said...

nice choice of words- keep it up! glad to be of acquaintance through thursday poets- my posting this week~ http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/08/04/strength-of-faith/

beccagivens said...

WE must spread hope, faith, and peace of patience!

Nice ending to a message and reminder for each of us. It must begin with us; creating a ripple effect that spreads from the center.

Manoj said...

Nicely done.. a sense of honesty is what comes through!

here's my entry this week: http://wp.me/p1hI0l-7w

UmamaheswariAnandane said...

True ..the world revolves around love

Caroline said...

Beautiful <3

wordpowersound said...

I love how you say "members" Indeed we are all members of this exclusive club called Earth. Let's not take it for granted! Peace be with you friend.

blitzken said...

I love the first two lines!

chromapoesy.com said...

The world is a family
If everyone strives for harmony

Thank you for your part in creating harmoney and a poetry community based on respect!

Donnetta said...

Very nice, Jingle. I wish people would put anger behind them. It would make all our lives so much better. D

Lolamouse said...

So true! Uplifting thoughts. Thanks for sharing them.

mairmusic said...

True statements all-- nicely phrased!

poetryroad said...

The word that came to my mind was "eloquent"!

Heaven said...

A beautiful message.. thanks for sharing this ~

marit said...

what a great message~

Shauna said...

our mindset is everything.

M.C. said...

The first four lines are my favorite: aptly written and I am happy I got to enjoy it.

ASHISH BARDHAN said...

Very Nice Poetry with an amazing Imagination
Great Work of Creativity !! Highly Expressive !!

It was indeed enjoyable after reading this one !!

Anyways, Take a look some of my Poetry Collections …
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/talent-underground/poetry-zone/

some of my Haiku Collections
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/creative-challenges/the-haiku-challenge/

and also, on my very recent Work as well
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2011/08/15/india-of-my-dream/

!!! Happy Rally !!!
Cheers !!

Lena said...

So poetically simple. I could almost hear music........!

deeju said...

Simple but perfect in delivering your imagination through words.

bendedspoon said...

This is beautiful. Beautiful world is born out of beautiful thoughts :)

Kay said...

Very lovely poem with a beautiful message of peace. Blessings!

haikulovesongs said...

so true! well said! ♥

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Your poetry has many deep thoughts.Beautifully written.


Melanie

sillyfrogsusan said...

Outstanding message...well said!

Ava said...

A wonderful message that longs to be spread. Excellent. Happy Rally.

Ann LeFlore said...

Outstanding and such lovely thoughts I am so happy to read this. My share this first rally for me is http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2011/08/agreement-for-thursday-poets-rally-week.html

magdalenahermanstories said...

If only everybody in the world thought so... Perfection!

ankokuhikaru said...

Nicely Written, and your words are true, to bad though that some things are to deeply ingrained in some cultures...
Well Well done. ^^

http://ankokuhikaru.wordpress.com/2011/08/30/poetry-lips-which-never-touch/

nefariousx said...

well written.

its positive message was really
cool.
thank you for sharing this.

abthomas said...

A lovely ode to the responsibility of respectability!

Teresa Marie said...

Wow, awesome poem! Blessings, Terri