Snowflake and giggling chips,
Golden hair dips,
Jokes baked,
Coke cans naked.
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Hungry eyes,
Sexy pies,
Ghosts pancakes,
Earthquake body shakes.
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Ex-lovers’ wine,
Angel and beast soup,
Someone screamed outside the door
While I noticed a bloody hand on the floor.
39 comments:
Excellent, much imagination has gone into this, Loved it.
Yvonne.
ha...love the little twisted perspective in this...creepy in a good way!
Wild Imagination!...nice
Creative take on the prompt! I didn't expect that ending!
Hi Jingle! I love Edward Hopper. You did a great job with this.
Great job!!
Wow, very cool.
Creative and unpredictable!
Thanks for your visit to my blog.. it makes me feel enhanced..
Liked your haunting poem..hope you found that the hand had red color and not blood.. keep visiting ..thanks..
Really nicely done. Good flow and a nice twist there
really good..
well written n fantastic imagination
Deep, imaginative and slightly creepy. I like it. :)
Wild and creepy...
very interesting take :)
The end was something I never imagined...I liked the built up a lot...engrossing fare.
I liked the punchy, shortness of the tempo and the rhymes that made the ending even punchier!
I was hooked from the giggling chips - Bravo!
Thanks for the visit - Enjoyable read. Shah. X
That bloody hand! Oh my. All sorts of things can happen on a Summer Evening, and this painting invites us to find them, as you have.
This is the first time I've come across a Magpie Tale post. Love your take on the photograph. Sinister. Thank for your visit and I shall now pop over to visit Magpie Tale.
Very different and imaginative.
I love naked coke cans!
Nice little write, with a twist of dark. Angel and beast soup....? Is there a recipe...?!
Takes me along some mysterious journey. Loved it!
Wow...great!
Very creative and fits with the Hopper.
Thanks for your visit!
Naked Coke cans! Now I'll never get to sleep!
Giggling chips and naked Coke cans. Wickedly imaginative and fun (even with the creepy ending)! Thank you.
Surreal with humor.
Whoa! What a mental ride! Great images!
Looks like we were on the same page this time. Liked the twist.
The pic and the first lines did bring me to a 1950's era, that kinda feel, real nice!! :)
Happy potluck!!!
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Love ur style ! Nice write !
NICE READ ENJOYED IT
WOW..fabulous imagination..i loved how the little words took me to wider horizons..creepy and cool..:)
Great Poem...with a sinister element...Angel and Beast soup...great!
Angel and beast soup ... hmmm! Interesting composition ~~ with a surprise ending! :-)
what a journey. you lead me one direction then took off in another. good job!
quite a surreal write ...lovely in a sensual yet creepy way ...thank you
Really creative, evocative piece :)
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