Love is like a river,
One dreams of it forever;
Wheat dreams of being French bread,
Muses dream of being magpie tales that are widely read,
Love is like a river,
A kiss does really matter;
Rains make love swell,
Getting wet will make passion dwell.
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53 comments:
Rain is very sensual...
Ah...you have given a new definition to longing and love....well said. :)
A postive upbeat read done very well. I enjoyed it!!!
love in the rain, sets a tone:
gentle rain or stormy, equally erotic.
rel
I like the mood and feel of this poem; love and rain and water go together so well..The line about the kiss resonates especially.
I like the mood and feel of this poem; love and rain and water go together so well..The line about the kiss resonates especially.
I hadn't thought of wheat dreaming of becoming French bread - clever...
wow, great post on several prompts response...
Yes, I also like the tone of this poem..:)
A wonderful combination of all the prompts!
Enjoyed the flow!
Nice. Thanks!
very enjoyable. I found it beautiful
Beautiful Write ! Love is Grand!
Love is like a river! I like this!
My kiss poem: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/28/forever-changed-2/
cute wordplay :)
I dig the pic :)
My entry: http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/08/25/love-eternal/
nice images
Thanks for putting in a plug for the dreams of wheat. It has taken too much flack by all the carb haters. A great take on the prompt.
Love and rain, warmth and coolness a combination that can be most romantic. It can well trigger off pleasant memories of those young carefree days.
Very nice ~~ Love is like a river, dreams, kisses and the rains. All melded together for pleasant thoughts in your nice poem.
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Wheat dreams of being French bread...lol!! that was fun!!..... and rain does create a romantic ambience!!
Fabulously said! I truly enjoyed it. My offering this week- http://terri0729.wordpress.com/2011/08/29/soul-kiss/
Enjoy the picnic!
I love the rain. And I loved the way you said wheat dreams of being French bread :)
Good one! I especially liked this line: "Wheat dreams of being French bread,"
Good one - love the wheat and french bread too.
Anna :o]
Lyrical and sweet. I too was captivated by the wheat/french bread line.
This was a pleasure to read. Yhanks for sharing.
Yvonne.
I too enjoyed wheat dreaming of being french bread. (surely a more high position than something such as cream of wheat!) Nice poem all around. Interesting way of combining all prompts.
Very .... wet and lovely!
a little wet love is never a bad thing...smiles. very nice verse...
simply loved this.
wonderful.. :)
You sure combined a lot of prompts for this one. Wow!
Lovely, quite lovely!
Love in the rain, and those tears of joy. Very nice.
I love the line "wheat dreaming of becoming French bread" very clever.
Love where you went with this. Great combination of prompts.
My favorite line would also be...
'Wheat dreams of..."
hmmm.. hmmm.. hmmm.. no offence but this writing is very similar to the style of jingle.. hmmm.. anyway, great work! thank you for sharing. here's mine.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2009/11/24/fluttering-in-an-envelope/
Wonderful poem. Very well said.
Melanie
Haha that's great!
a beautiful poem in its own write and an amazing use of the prompts! ♥
My mind saw beauty as I read this.... Very nice! :)
A sweet happy take on many aspects of love.
Hmmm... I see a bunch of rather subtle but sexual imagery here. (French, river, swell, getting wet). I am not saying you are a purveryor of pervesion, far from it. On the contrary, I love a poem that can be very sweet but in its shadow also lies a passionate heat.
Title in itself speaks volumes :)
Nice read !!!
Cleverly done. The sideways approach leaves the reader slightly wondering where it's going. The final two lines are inspirational. Sideways and resolving!
This one reminds me of myself, when I enjoyed the rain just as much!
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Oh, you ve got such a cute blog!! I love it!
Nice post.))
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I really enjoyed this. Wheat isn't alone in dreaming of french bread.
Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Hugs, pat
I like the oblique approach to the subject.
Sweet - I loved the tenderness.
Great work!
rain is sensual ... it does wonder to love ... very well penned. :)
I like the dreams of wheat.
deliciously written and presented. loved the photo too
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