Hummingbirds flap wings
in rhythm, kissing the flowers,
stirring autumn nights.
.
Shutting her wet eyes,
She lets music of his words
echo through her head.
.
"Past" shall not withhold,
"Tomorrow" is to unfold,
"Now", please hug me tight.
28 comments:
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when you are in love, your beloved's words are surely music.
Lovely-e-s…especially the middle one, I think, with its shift from hard “t” consonants to the soothing “u”s in “music” and “through” and the “e”s of “echo” and “head” -- such warm form with the cozy content.
This is beautiful. That animated graphic just fits your lovely words perfectly. I'm so sorry but I cannot get to your Alphabe-Thursday link! Your blog will not go back past this post for me. I just wanted you to know I tried very hard to stop by, though.
28 comments:
when you are in love, your beloved's words are surely music.
aaahhh - so much romance in this..hummingbirds are cool..
Oh, what an affectionate write... I want a hug, now, too.
I've just noticed our hummingbirds seem to have gone south. Soon I will join them...but not soon enough. Lovely write, my friend.
It's the time of year we want to draw the beloved close. Here we are having our first snow. Lovely haikus.
All are wonderful! Love the animation in the pic as well. I am leaving with a smile on my face...thank you!
Very romantic. Hugs cure many things as well as bond together those in love.
Beth
Lovely-e-s…especially the middle one, I think, with its shift from hard “t” consonants to the soothing “u”s in “music” and “through” and the “e”s of “echo” and “head” -- such warm form with the cozy content.
nice...i love how you start gentle..hummingbirds are so cool...and then bring the wisdom in the last...
Very nicely written. I love the way you put this piece together- very nice imagery
Did you make the animated gif? I love that it worked for you. I used to make them all the time!
Love the haiku. Birds, love, hugs - such sweet sentiments combined so well and expressively. Thank you!
Beautiful haiku!
Blessings!
I am so behind in my blog visits! So... I want to be sure to thank you so much for your visit and kind words!
These are just wonderful and well written!
Thanks for dropping by and enjoying "my little boy."
Last one especially spoke to me. Love the way you "interpreted" the words.
Nice piece of writing and a very cute picture!:)
such lovely lines. Thankyou
And thankyou for the comment on my site...thankyou!
stirring autumn nights are such lovely images including hug me tight please.
my share is here:
http://everydayamazin.blogspot.com/2011/10/thoughts.html
The flow of love, from the world outside to the hug held close, beautiful.
Gene
Warm and cuddly poetry. :)
enjoyed reading your haikus.
Lovely poem!
great descriptives first two stanzas
and what a finale in the last.
wonderful Haiku...one of my favorites.
thank you for sharing.
Sensuously realistic. Many can relate to this!
Hank
I do hope that I am not the only one seeing those birds flap their wings in rhythm. I will go back and check:) Nice poem.
a wise poem written gently.
these are so beautiful ~ *sighs*
such music
Lib
This is beautiful. That animated graphic just fits your lovely words perfectly. I'm so sorry but I cannot get to your Alphabe-Thursday link! Your blog will not go back past this post for me. I just wanted you to know I tried very hard to stop by, though.
Gorgeous!
Now! Please hug me tight! smiles...
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