Sunday, August 21, 2011

Sunday 160-Untitled

The iron tower in Paris
bends yet not to fall,
Light clips
& girdles it,
As the Sun enters
with its blond touches,
the tower tilts its head
to join the affair.

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Monkey Man Sunday 160

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32 comments:

Anonymous said...

Love the poem, but couldn't get the video or pcture to play.

Here's my offering for this first Gooseberry Garden picnic: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/21/this-eden/

Anonymous said...

"the sun with its blond touches" I DIG THIS LINE :)

poetry in motion!!!!

here's my offering: http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/08/21/vanished/

ds said...

Love this! Thank you.

Monkey Man said...

I really enjoy work that plays to the theater of the mind. Thanks for playing along with the Sunday 160.

Caroline said...

Awesome !!!

Anonymous said...

It was quite nice with some really good imagery. Sun with blond touches, being one of those. :)

RHYTHM AND RHYME said...

Wonderful words, Thanks for sharing.

Yvonne.

Brian Miller said...

smiles. very nice...love the personification of each and hte intimacy...

Jyoti Mishra said...

:)
Beautifully crafted

Chris said...

i loved this poem, what an image!

Anonymous said...

nice
i liked it
do come and check out some of my
poetry if you can stand offense:)

Rachel Hoyt said...

Great poem! I couldn't get the video to play either. :(

Gigi Ann said...

Liked the poem but saw no video or image.

Anonymous said...

Perfect imagery! Thanks for Poetry Picnic (I too couldn't play the video :(

mindsinger said...

I love the light and airy flair you give this piece. That iron can be light and airy is quite a feat!

Daydreamer said...

NO, I can't see the vid either. Maybe you didn't embed the code properly?

Lovely verse though :)

Pat Cegan said...

What a fun poem. I lived it very much. Hugs, pat

Anonymous said...

What a fun poem. I lived it very much. Hugs, pat

Anonymous said...

What a fun poem. I lived it very much. Hugs, pat

Unknown said...

Your poem is great. Sun with blond touches... Like this

Jenny said...

My goodness. You certainly have a way with words. I couldn't get the video to play, though.

Anonymous said...

Lovely imagery ~~

Anonymous said...

Very well written.
Love it!

Jinksy said...

A picturesque 160...

Lissa said...

a love affair between sun and tower? sweet.

thanks for stopping by my blog. have a lovely day.

Irene said...

This is so beautiful and uplifting! Excellent work! :-)

Harvee said...

I saw the picture through your words.

Unknown said...

great imagery ....loved it thank you x

Jessica Thompson said...

Haha wow, that's great!

Unknown said...

Loved the way you made it move in my mind...

M. A. S. said...

This imagery is stunning!!!

Anonymous said...

i love this! such wonderful imagery and the ending totally rocks!