Image Credit: via Magpie Tale by Tess:
Lunch, George Tooker, 1964, Columbus Museum of Art
Lunch, George Tooker, 1964, Columbus Museum of Art
It starts with a game show,
Then lunch break,
Then of course case studies until midnight.
.
You’ve seen them sitting
In protected room, in fat
and itchy chairs, their heads hang low.
.
They are waiting for the last case
Represented to them,
Hopefully, it is a better one.
.
They rarely chat among themselves,
Or go to other rooms for a change,
The channel is fixed at #7.
.
Eventually, they’ve come to
Folded, infirm, and loose stacks of cards
to spread and play on the table.
.
If they have known a little
less of each successive program in town,
Things would not be that bad as everything is unsaid.
*****
48 comments:
An excellent interpretation of the pic.
Channel 7 is just the worst possible.
Too bad for them.
Sounds like a grim existence...
What a terrific and frightening interpretation of the prompt.
Oh wow... This is really good and grim, you know?
Good stuff my friend.
The feeling here is a complete lack of enthusiasm...well done!
Quite melancholic I might say, but a very nice read. I feel you did quite well!!
A sad state of affairs...great take on the prompt
well seen and well written!
Awesome write!
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Wow! Have you been there, done that, and bought that souvenir t-shirt? An amazingly realistic treatment of this painting!
Always hate fat itchy chairs...giggle...
I Like the obvious 'quietness'...Ha! That souvenir T-shirt (Mary Ann Potter's comment!)
What a way to live. reminds me of a room full of jobless waiting to interview for the one open position.
Hey, burn that midnight oil, Peeps!
PEACE!
but what's not said is very important!
the eye sees what the scenario says,
and body language makes it's own noise.
interesting piece worked up here, almost of dreamlike quality.
good job.
Love the card idea- thanks!
I'm both impressed with your interpretation and that last comment!
Tedium to boredom and back again,
no sound echoes in the halls,
life is spent without any hope,
staring down the walls.
Beautifully written poem, Cello Strings!
Nice interpretation of the prompt!...
JJRod'z
I love your unique take on the prompt.
No way to live a life ... nice take on the photo this week!
This feels deseperate and a bit depressing. Yes, it does express what the picture portrays.
Hello.
What a stark & grim existence.
Excellent take on the prompt.
Your creativity is limitless!
Thanks for sharing.
For ref:
Your Reward Is My Sorrow
this was a nice change of pace from the other responses...nicely done.
Sounds very gloomy to me. very nicely written :)
That last line pulls it together nicely....great writing!!
Oh...that speaks of sheer hopelessness so well.
Thought provoking. Hmmm. Thank you.
Very well done!
Very nice description; fat itchy chairs! Love it!
Fine take on the painting.
paints the picture into words so vividly...nicely done!
wow, cool poem, fits the picture perfectly:)
Excellent!
Anna :o]
I particularly like "in fat and itchy chairs"...and, the fixed channel...perfect!
I have seen this in retirement homes. Its sad. These people need a boost. I admire people who volunteer to come in and cheer the elderly up!
Great poem. In addition, you were the selected winner on my blog of 2 $5 gift cards to Starbucks. Please send me your contact information and I will mail the cards.
My prayer is that you will treat someone else to coffee and share the love of Jesus with them.
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This catches it exactly. I particularly enjoyed:
They rarely chat among themselves,
Or go to other rooms for a change,
The channel is fixed at #7.
Exremely sad, but so clever. Congrats
Stop listening to the TV! Live! I want to swing the doors and windows wide...
grimness captured wonderfully.
Oo! Those itchy chairs! :)
I loved the image of fat and itchy chairs -- well done!
Love how you interpreted the image.
A grim life, nicely told.
what a grim existence!
it's sad how people can work together everyday, and have nothing to do with each other
"Glued" to a sad existence ... suffocating and stagnating ...
Great job on whatever the prompt -- which I am guessing is the photo image!!
Thank you for sharing this again to the current audience. My entry "Lost - Can you see me?"
Excellent!
http://halfwaybetweenthegutter.wordpress.com/2012/04/04/epiphany-2/
Seems like knowing too much is not a good thing. Good delivery of a complex situation!
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