Tuesday, October 11, 2011

How I wish To Be A Fish


How I wish
2 be a fish.
.
with flapping fins
the fun begins.
.
I will  do my underwater association
without sunscreen or lotion.
.
I will follow you
when we come to the same school.
.
I will remain in the sea
in order to swim free.
.
with lessons taught,
I won’t carry any negative thought.

 Image Credit: Google.com

13 comments:

Ann LeFlore said...

This is very cute and being a fish swimming in the sea free as can be what a lovely thought and image]
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RHYTHM AND RHYME said...

Original and I loved it,

Yvonne.

Lydia said...

That is how I see fish too! A life such as theirs is all the more reason for mankind to stop the onslaught of pollution in our oceans.

The Unknowngnome said...

A sweet little piece. Enjoyed being free for awhile.

Marbles in My Pocket said...

An interesting wish that does sound intriquing. Nicely done!
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Kay said...

Sweet, simple and original! :)

Anonymous said...

Witty!!

and with with lessons taught,
I won’t carry any negative thought.


I would have to agree!!

Charlie Parant said...

with the lesson taught...just don't get caught. Nice job!

Anonymous said...

I love the simplicity and the almost tide-like flow. Well done!

Melissa said...

simple, in pairs - like fish swimming in a tank. Thank you for sharing with us!

Marbles in My Pocket said...

Very cute. Nice one.

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Anonymous said...

Please drown none of those thoughts. nice, and nemoish.

Terri said...

Oh, I wish, I wish, I wish! lol, how cute!! Grins, Terri