Everything is 'perfect' between the two, until one day, she decides to follow him for once.
And she sees him stop at his ex-girlfriend's house.
She wants revenges.
He's shocked to catch her in the arms of his best friend.
She doesn't know that he has gone to bid final goodbye, nothing more.
Write a fictional story in 55 words. Give it a try and notify G-man at:
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Thank You for Reading and Commenting!
A sage 55 indeed, Jingle.
(Heed this warning, people!)
"a fictional story in 55 words".
There. I'm done !
Revenge is an entrapment for ourselves! It never satisfies!
A wonderful 55 words. most enjoyable to read.
If she only knew. :) Revenge is never good. I really enjoyed this :) Have a great weekend :)
I am a lover of words. It would be soo very hard for me to limit a story to 55. With that being said, job well done!
Communication is so hard, especially between the sexes, it's a wonder we ever get anything right. I especially liked the rhythm of your poem.
Jumping to conclusions can get you in trouble.
Excellent 55 My Dear!!
Than you so much for this fine contribution with a message..
Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
Oh, what a sad misunderstanding!
Well done Jingle....:-) Hugs
Wow...Revenge in itself is a misconception too. Great 55!
Nice 55, Jingle. Revenge is always bitter. Not the right thing to do in any situation.
Wow! Oh the sad deception of misconceived perception!
Blessings & Aloha!
Ohhhh - best-friends arms is very bad
I think that would hurt a man twice
nice one jingle ^^
Succinct and to the point!
Happy Pink Saturday, Jingle!
All too often...
Great reminder about jumping to conclusions.
oh wow all she had to do was ask!!
wow thats a great story and in only 55 words wow
Oh well in my ventures I did find
Something wrong in my mind
As to follow him to another spot
It seems familiar I have not forgot
As to find the lover in their caress
To get up and leave this ugly mess
enjoy Jingle, HAPPY SATURDAY TO YA(+)
Jingle: Neat story. Shows how wrong we can be. Oh, that tendency to jump to conclusions! D
So clever..yes, we must be careful!
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