Flinging out of the furnace
R the flames
That leap forward,
With No sound,
The intense desire
Of the fire
Bursts like a hungry hound,
Searching and wolfing down preys
On the hunting ground.
Has NO patience,
Carries NO weight.
Starts from sparks of flint,
Burns from the deepest part
Of your heart
In thousand of degree
And sets you free
In unexpected way!
Monday Poetry Potluck
Wonderful poem, with a great rhythm. And I love the photograph!
Now that is one hot poem.
love it jingle! and how we all need it - love the lines
Has NO patience,
Carries NO weight
Wonderful as always Jingle.
love it as always :)
Love this Jingle! Lovely poem!
You've done it again!!
What a pretty kitty! And the words were lovely too, Jingle!
I think this is my favorite of your poems so far! Wonderful read! Inspiring too........my fire is more like embers these days, that need a lot of blowing on to make spark up.......but I Remember When, hee hee!
Really like this ...the flame and the fire...bkm
Another good one!
The fire and the flame...makes a perfect conbination in this very fine poem Ji...you have done it again!!!! Thanks so much x
Wow I love it!:3 And that is such a cute cat<3<3<3 meow~~ Wonderfully written once again Jingle, rhythm it on XD
Simply lovely as always !!!
Lovely. The kind of fire we want to burn.
Hi Jingle - Nice poem! keep it up :)
This is on fire....
I am thrilled to make your acquaintance here -- and for your visit to my blog and invitation!
I am off to the Pantry to check out what poetical choices await!
Thank you Jingle!
Loved your Poem.Hot Hot Fire Poem presented in a beautiful way
It's nice poetry in very simpe and attractive words.
Great! There is a resonance here. -J
well written.. loved it..! :) shape, flow and verse all went very well! :D
How truly you have poemed here, Ji. Well done... and I love the little kitty. Made me smile ... Thanks!
Yes, wonderful and cute kitty!
"Burns from the deepest part
Of your heart". Yes it does. And "... sets you free
In unexpected way(s)!"
A good example of how poetry can express what prose fails to include!
lovely post Jingle :)
good lines in this well written poem dear xx
Pretty poem and I love the pic of the kitty!
Intensely creative. Glad I read it.
That is awesome. Know that I dislike the slang of that word "Aewsome" so I try not to use it. I mean to say that your poem rings so true. Creative fire burns white hot and not when you actually expect it because it is serendipitious. You nailed it here.
Thanks for this, I needed some inspiration.
Wow i love that the creative fire in us sets us free and ablaze like nothing in this world, you made me suddenly get charged with creativity just by those encouraging words Jingle x
indeed, creativity sets us free! this is lovely, jingle!
I love how creativity works and you captured that feeling perfectly, Jingle. You never know where it will go and that's the fun of it all!
This is difficult style then your usual, and it come out excellent. Love all your poems, but especially like this one.
I just needed this kind of encouragement right now, Jingle!! WOW!! You write the perfect words for my mood! YOU ROCK!!!
This poem is just too good! Creative sparks flying all over the place now! Need to get hold of them, before my head catches fire.. :)
Oh yeah, I like this poem. It has a wonderful flow!
My favourite line is "had NO patience." Love and Light, Sender
I could use a flame like that...to set me free...
I love the way you captured the essence of that creative spark. Very poignant and yes, that fire has no patience. It comes when it comes and we better be prepared with our sword(pen)and shield (paper) :) We must nurture it or else the flame will die out. Something to be cherished.
Thanks so much for reading my humble stuff and inviting me to the Potluck! I am definitely joining!
Creativity is like a fire and it just has to be set free or it can destroy you!
Have a great day...
Beautiful poem. I really enjoyed the imagery...thanks for the invitation to potluck. I wasn't online until late tonight but appreciate the thought. Have an awesome week :)
Filled with urgent energy. Each read was very intense.
I love this poem, Jingle. Creative fire that 'burns from the deepest part of your heart'...well, that says it all!
Creativity does indeed set us free...:)
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