How is everything so far?
so full of rays of emptiness?
Do you still have interest
as life is surveyed and reprogrammed?
Are you sure that
X-rays transubstantiate a mind, or a choice?
Do you give novel feelings credit?
Is she still your wife, you husband?
She used to hover, baby you,
She also chives you to focus on your own plate,
But you distance with a mild gesture,
Fearing what others judge you….
So constant is the unsettling tide
where beach, waves, and wind collide.
Wishing you a sunny day
as she remains far, far away.
Haiku for Haiku challenge/ Alphabet Thursday: L is for Locks
Stuck in locked mind,
Life is not going to be grand,
You’d better unwind.
Lovely colored locks,
Reminder to messy stocks,
Need keys to succeed.
Locks is a good L word. I had my "locks" touched up by my beautician daughter today!
Very wise observations--particularly about the locked mind! K.
fun and creative!
Simple and sweet haiku. :)
And where is that key to succeed, please?
Paint This Image in Your Heart
amazing poem and haiku :)
Great *L* post – and haiku!
Have a good Alphabe-Thursday and look forward to *seeing* you again,
Lovely poem. Your Haiku poem is fine.
lovely l post, my attention was "locked"...
true sentiments on Haiku.
Love the last line of the second part of the haiku- "Need keys to suceed!"
I loved your creativity Ji..
Someone is Special
Great "L" word! I agree with Anita--very creative!!
I like the gentle philosophical reflectiveness of your first poem here - it does fit with the fairy in the image very well - makes me want to daydream too...
comprehensive and witty words.
well done poetry and Haiku
I would have never thought of this for the Letter "L"...
Thanks for Linking.
This was a fun & creative entry for "L". Nice imagery.
Thanks for sharing.
Love Has Seeped Into My Heart
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