You know ___ is coming,
Your eyes glow,
Your mind does a brief ghost mapping,
You don’t have any ___,
Your followers become restless,
Shuffling like adolescents in a dancing party,
It glitters like ___,
What is it?
Spaceseathrill?
Is it sunflowers fresh like morning dew?
Or sunshine in spring rain
that offers hope to almost everything?
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19 comments:
breath taking to me,
way to go,
you rock.
:)
nice pen, love the mystery ♥ You may enjoy my Free Write Friday prompt going up tonight. It's a mystery box as well ;)
my latest
http://magicinthebackyard.wordpress.com/wp-admin/post.php?post=5128&action=edit
Well done..love it>
Have a great weekend.
a fun 55.
well done.
I like the fairy tale feel of this. It was delightful to read.
Well done.
Divine!
a unique one..
enjoyed read this oiece;
Lovely penned.
I can smell it coming soon ~
55 is alive.
unique and taking of breath ...
simply fantastic,
you make us wonder.
;)
love love loved this, very unique.. the spaces let the reader design the story
The anticipation to look forward to the surprise builds up. Great illustrative work!
Nicely penned!
Such a poignant piece!
very eclectic.
elephant slave
The words go so well with the pic, they have a futuristic sci-fi feel to them, really good, congrats.
Very well done. Mysterious and attention grabbing at the same time. I loved it. Be blessed.
http://elizena-lovingmycreator.blogspot.com/2012/02/soul-song.html
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